All Comments on 'Aiding and Abetting'

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texlootexlooover 1 year ago

I know sone saw it as homophobic. It did have a Chasing Amy: a deep dicking can turn any lesbian type of vib. A true lesbian isn't going to be turned straight by a guy. Some bisexual or pansexual people don't fully understand their own sexuality until years into their adult life. Still her verbal assault on her ex girlfriend about her new lover being better because had had a real dick felt cruel. It was hard to read. Still, in the heat of the moment, after one's lover has screwed another, bitter insults seem understandable. Having said all that, I can state that I really enjoyed reading the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

There were a lot of funny parts. Thanks for the laughs and the great writing.

I'm going to have to read this a few more times. I can't recollect any homophobic parts as some have said. Maybe they were trying to be funny.

KaeyoKaeyoover 1 year ago

I find it hilarious how seriously some folks take a light hearted story such as this, throwing insults and accusations around with wild abandon. But, I guess that’s the internet anymore. Humor and fun is disallowed. We must all be super serious at all times, and be sure to check all the appropriate boxes on the social justice chart!

As for me, this is a nice funny story with a happy ending for two good people.

chasbo38chasbo38over 1 year ago

Nice plot, good twist, great ending. Kept it up.

shadowpadshadowpadover 1 year ago

"Wall safe behind the Rembrandt" - has got to be one of the best lines on this whole site

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

v tight story sorry it wsa so short caught by every twist

esp last few classic

OldmantruckerOldmantruckerover 1 year ago

2nd x just as good as the first. 💯👌💯💯💯💯💯👍👍👍👍👍💯💯👍👌👌👌🤷🎉🤷🤷😉✌️🙋🙋🍻🍕

CurrentParameterCurrentParameterover 1 year ago

great story. nice and neatly done.

tarkabukktarkabukkover 1 year ago

What an enjoyable story. I love a happy ending.

Thank you for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice to read stories where good guys don't lose ...

Richard1940Richard1940over 1 year ago

Love the ending. Thank you. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

thank u again pulse still racing 2nd read within 3 weeks

sg1010sg1010over 1 year ago

AN EXCELLENT CREATION !

THANK YOU ! !

SlomoverSlomoverover 1 year ago

Great story laced with romance sex and humor. All the ingredients of a well written good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

5 Stars on a great story . I really enjoyed it

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Reading this for the umpteenth time. Still 5*.

rbloch66rbloch66over 1 year ago

That was a lot of fun!

K1tten92K1tten92over 1 year ago

Really enjoyed this. Made me laugh loads.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

At least an eight - out of five stars.

J6480J6480over 1 year ago

Excellent, amusing and well written. More needed

ttjbjr54ttjbjr54over 1 year ago

Well written and an easy read

kaotic2kaotic2over 1 year ago

This was great.

Cracker270Cracker270over 1 year ago

I reread this one often. Enjoy it every time. Well written, fun, just the right length. Checks all the boxes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story, second (or third?) time through.

somewhere east of Omaha

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Freakin' hilarious !😂

chasbo38chasbo38over 1 year ago

Candy switched side too quickly to be believable but fictions the prodjuct of the author's imagination, right ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fantastic, nuff said

enderlocke77enderlocke77over 1 year ago

Think I missed something was she bi or homosexual? Oop that was a dumb question lol obvi she is bi. Ok found it before I go on yes it was funny and I enjoyed it. but homosexual and heterosexual don't work that way there's no switch but yeah rest of it was funny good just hope they don't marry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Re-read again. Still a fantastic, humorous story. Just makes s person feel good. Obviously, still a five star story.

JPB

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story. Was kinda hoping the ending would include his workmates reactions when they discover hes "straightened out" the hottest girl at work. And his ex-fiance seeing him walk down the aisle with a way hotter girl.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well done! Pretty good story and humorous. Reminds me of author Harddaysnight style. Struck home too. My sister was supposedly a confirmed lesbian in college, with a female partner, but then ended up marrying a nice guy in shortly after graduation. 25 years later and they are still married with two near adult kids. I think people's 'swing' can be more flexible than many think at a young age. Her 'girlfriend' found a 'wife' and they remained friends, at least as far as I knew. Nice to see it handled with such aplomb and humor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I more time and still a great piece of work.

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOGover 1 year ago

I am pretty sure this is AT LEAST the 2nd time I have read this tale...and it is STILL HILARIOUS ...from the look on Civ's face when Candy kissed Don...to the end of the story when Ben reveals he has known about Candy's leanings..."Does this mean you are not a lesbian anymore??"...just TOO classic to not heartily enjoy!!

I read down a bunch of comments...did not see anything 'negative', so to speak...obviously, Candy must have had some "Bisexual" tendencies, or this would not have turned out so successfully!! If someone has commented negatively, that is on them, and NOT on 'leapyearguy'!!

Justifiably a Five**5**Star story...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌💫💫💫💫💫🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉💯

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

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Hey @chasbo38

Re: "Candy switched side too quickly to be believable but fictions the prodjuct of the author's imagination, right ?"

Actually...nope.

I knew a couple ofyoung women who were in a committed relationship together for years, but after a particularly brutal lie - one had her friends tell her GF she had been hit by a car and killed (but in actuality, she moved states) the other girl's next lover was a guy she ended up marrying and having kids with before her untimely death,

So, yes it can indeed happen, where a person is actually Bisexual or even Omnisexual/Pansexual (attracted to all sexual genders from Cisgender - Straight opposite sex to the entirety of the LGBTQIA+)

l0ver0tical0ver0ticaover 1 year ago

Absolutely LOVED it! And laughed my a$$ off while lovin' it. Great story!

GardenshedGardenshedover 1 year ago

Ok, just randomly read this story, and I was laughing all the way through it, at points tears were streaming I was laughing so hard. Very good silly story. Just added to my favorites.

Made my day, thanks for writing.

5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

DwarfLord50DwarfLord50over 1 year ago

My third time reading this, and the comment about the cleaning supplies behind the Rembrandt still cracks me up. Good fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Cynthia is a slut.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

People quip about sexual orientation being 'wired', yet men who like other men and women who like other women have married and had children for centuries, if not millennia. It can't all have been just deceit and cover-up. If it's wired, then it's biological and I don't think people's neurons are wired digitally like 'On'=gay, 'Off'=straight. I met my first wife while in grad school, while she was an undergrad. She lived with her female roommate, and it was obvious that they were not just that. Yet we had an instant attraction and 'hit it off', becoming a committed couple and moved into together after 8 months. She told me about her 'relationship' with the roommate as lover but said it was over. We even invited her over and had an upfront discussion over drinks, and she ended up at our wedding, and an 'auntie' to our two kids. Did I ever wonder? No, not really, and her former companion had another female lover, and I do know from my wife that they "didn't share". So our two daugthers got to have TWO aunties, albeit one was a bit 'dykey'. And, hey, this was Los Angeles in the 90s. Did her parents know? Never came up, although they seemed delighted she had a commited male companion at 25. I did wonder because they were always so 'grateful'.

Leapyearguy captures this dynamic with almost HardDaysNight style humor and panache. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This was more a comedy than a romance. But many women are bi-sexual. So it isn't a big deal when they end up in a normal marriage and have children. A bisexual woman is more common than a bisexual man.

Gadf77Gadf77about 1 year ago

Short and sweet 😋. Though I kinda wish that he got it on with her mom too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I absolutely love this story. Funny, romantic, and a happy ending.

Oatmeal1969Oatmeal1969about 1 year ago

A sequel that challenged the relationship would be good. She was a lesbian for a while. what if she had doubts? What if a past lover tries to pull her back in or pry her away? Ultimately is want a story that answers those questions without damaging what they have. This heartwarming story established them as an unlikely sweet couple.

BlueEyd2BlueEyd2about 1 year ago

What a fun story!! Thank you!!!

KronkBonkKronkBonkabout 1 year ago

One of my favorites. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Brilliant. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great characterization, excellent scenario and really enjoyed the humor. And great insight into the former so-called "lover" and the nature of that relationship. You hit the nail on the head there. The Other Woman was all about self and that's typical. The lesbian/gay relationships are all about wanting what they want, and getting it the way they want, and when they want, and how they want. They miss the point about real love being complimentary, not being the same. About real love meaning you give in to others and are concerned for their best, not just yours. It's about playing a melody , when it's supposed to be a harmony. Homosexuality is all about selfishness.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wow, what a great story. Now I have a need for more candy. A follow up series would be great

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Clever little romances like this are a type of soul food. Soooo Goooood.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Plot twist with absolutely no justification shown in the character development.

Not even a hint she might be bi.

"Oh I didn't realize dicks really are great, so I'm suddenly in love."

jlg07jlg07about 1 year ago

One of the best, funniest, stories on the site! I've read this a number of times and never fails to bring enjoyment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This one makes ya' smile.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

OK, I had to put parts of my brain on hold a bit, but I liked it. Very cute and sweet. Entertaining.

I don't give many 5's but you got one. Original LW.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I can't remember how many times I've read this. But it's worth every one of them :)

ShelbyNooneShelbyNooneabout 1 year ago

I needed a pick-me-up, and a laugh today. Rereading this story provided both!

AA82ndAAAA82ndAAabout 1 year ago

The story was a real lifter. Fun and entertaining all in one. Great theme and has a promise of a good ending; which came at the right time.

JimSensesJimSensesabout 1 year ago

Great story. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

The quick switch could cause whiplash but was still a good tale, even the third time! Thank you.

somewhere east of Omaha

other2other1other2other112 months ago

I keep reading this one and I always love it

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

10* story! As was said before, the whiplash at the end could cause damage, but only to your laughter vocal cords. More stories needed.

LanmandragonLanmandragon11 months ago

This is the fourth or fifth time I have read this and I can’t get enough of the cynical, loving humour; wonderful!

AmbulAmbul11 months ago

Terrific love story. I really liked it. Very believable in all respects.

Foggybottom81Foggybottom8111 months ago

I just have to re-read this every few weeks. Lightens my somber moods.

BabalooieBabalooie11 months ago

I love tgis

I JOVE THIS!!! FIVE BIG ONES.

BabalooieBabalooie11 months ago

I'll try to wrrite this with ihe lights on; I love this. Five big ones.

ClearmuseClearmuse11 months ago

Fun story, nice tight package. Thanks!

FandeborisFandeboris11 months ago

`Thus probably one of the best “going straight” stories. It was funny. Had one of the best lines with advice that I could imagine. In general an excellent read and funny to boot.

mattenwmattenw11 months ago

Wow, I have rarely read such a funny and yet inspiring story. Ben in particular has an excellent part with his hidden "wisdom".

Good plot, professionally implemented, bravo! 5*!

FaceForRadioFaceForRadio11 months ago

Really fun story!! 5 stars +++

BlueEyd2BlueEyd211 months ago

Great job!!! THANKS!

RustyReaderRustyReader11 months ago

2md time I've read this story Just a sweet wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

One of my favorite stories. .

Su_suSu_su10 months ago

I loved your story - happy, witty, fun. I laughed out loud. Thank you.

DoNotPassGoDoNotPassGo10 months ago

Ben's my favorite character. Seems clueless--not! A classic romance tale.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Loved it, there should be more stars. 5++

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Needed more Janice drama and burning of the bitch (Viv too). But maybe that's just me because I hate cheaters. The rest of the story was good though.

AssanaSophiaAssanaSophia10 months ago

Too short, but in a good way. It's good that it left me craving more, also knowing there was a forever-after. Still, it'd be satisfying to hear Janice finding out, getting jealous and going nuts.

crazymike45crazymike4510 months ago

Great romance. Better than most of the stories in this genre.

desecrationdesecration10 months ago

LUGs eventually have to ask themselves the Family Question.

AmbulAmbul9 months ago

Just a lovely and well-done romance. Short, but sweet from start to finish.

SirDesteclesSirDestecles9 months ago

One of the sweetest happyeverafer stories I've read in many a year. For the rest I agree 100% with AssanaSophia, too short in the best of ways. The perfect example of a great spinner of tales.... Knowing when to stop, and hardly ever when your audience says so! Brilliant one, thanks a stack leap year! It's a 5/5 from me and you got a new follower!

desecrationdesecration9 months ago

It's an interesting genre. In this story, she hides as a lesbian. Others hide behind fat. The real human women are chary of the degenerate partial humans out there.

ukrainianukrainian9 months ago

I laughed out loud several times whilst reading your work. Thank you for taking the time to make me laugh. The sex and romance were great as well. I confess that I've not read any more of you work. I'll remedy that when I've finished here. Many thanks. A part two would be nice. The characters deserve it.

1_Inquiring_mind1_Inquiring_mind9 months ago

Dads, yeah im not stupid play at the end had me cracking up. Well done!

FlamethrowFlamethrow9 months ago

A seriously entertaining story with great characters

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

GREAT LOVE STORY 💕💘❤️. FIVE STARS💘💕💕❤️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💘💘💘🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨. HOTTER THAN A FIRECRACKER

demure101demure1019 months ago

Funny and satisfying!

Waldteufel61Waldteufel619 months ago

I love this story more every time I read it, improbable as it may be it would make a terrific romantic comedy movie.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Besides reading this story for the umteenth it's a blast to read the reviews. Doubt there is a bad one. Not many stories can say that.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Like so many I come back to this story every so often, it makes me laugh then smile!

Great work! Thanks!

DP

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Delightful story. So full of promise and love. I hope the mother and daughter treat Don with respect and love.

HaroJohn710HaroJohn7108 months ago

The second story I saved on this site, and still one of the best reads. Have to say Ben was the star for me!

FrenchTomcatFrenchTomcat8 months ago

Not badly written, but I'm not too fond of the "lesbian because she hasn't met the right man yet" trope. Or women making sandwhiches, being hysteric, cheating and manipulative.

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