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Click hereFinally they both settled down back into their bodies and sighed in unison. This made them both laugh and Elissa smiled seeing the genuine happiness on his face as his laugh came from deep inside.
When she'd sent him on this mission she was hopeful the genuine kindness and warmth of the Shreen would reach that place in Jack's heart which was still wounded so long after his captivity. She'd done all she could to bring him back and had been mostly successful but something still blocked him.
Knowing his loving nature, Jack was the perfect choice for the mission and her faith had been justified. He'd found their pain and he'd healed it for them. They in turn had healed his. Everyone was happy.
Elissa had the man she'd fallen in love with, all of him. She was happiest of all.
My favourite of the Jack stories. The mix of comedy of errors & action is perfect.
This may be my favorite of the Jack Danner series. Although all of them are great. I would love to see the series continued. I’m aware that you write on your own timeframe and I respect that. I’m pretty sure that I’m not the only one that anxiously awaits your next story, no matter what it is
... Jack, the Strahak killer, Jack, the Love Doctor, ... Ambassador Jack, a friend of the Shreen, and their Queen (Lyn) and King (Tyg), ... and I'm not a Weenie either, ... a Good. Good Chapter, ... great series, ... ;-) ttfn
Each chapter of Jack's life just gets better and better! This one belongs up there along the works of sci-fi greats, it just needs to be novel length...perhaps you'll consider combining all the chapters into a book and publish it!? Damn brilliant, I thoroughly enjoyed it 5/5 Novas