All Comments on 'A Good Girl Gone Bad Ch. 04: Test'

Excellent job, Emily! :)

@AimEnigmaClick - thank you so much 😊 Emily

I've said it before, but you have this way of elevating a "typical sex stroke story" with your ability to bring heart, emotion and good characterization to it.

You convey that descent so well xxxxx

@Djmac1031 - smut with heart, that’s me 😊 Emily

@Pixiehoff - thank you so much 😊 Emily

I have to say that Amy and Emily are an extraordinary pair of teachers/participants in the bringing of Emma to nirvana. I don't think I have ever seen the patience and kindness in other stories of similar style. Now for the big bang.

@Campus77 - thank you - I suspect that I’m an outlier, but the group and restrained I did was like this - though sadly never in a female trio - that bit is my fantasy 😊 Emily

Very sexy and hot. As always so well done. WOW!

@WOWS - thank you 😊 Emily

Ella is being initiated to a world that she only had fantasies for; she said it best, “I felt used, but cared for”. Beautiful line, elegantly describing the feeling.

@Vitriolhack - thank you so much 😊 Emily

You keep outdoing yourself! What a chapter!

Relentlessly raunchy from the get-go, you served up one sexy surprise after another. The image of Emily and Ella cleaning up the mess on the floor was worthy of five stars even if the story ended there. But then there was the surprise Emily had waiting for Ella in the morning. Finally, Emily slurping the cum out of Ella’s ass was the coup de grace. Mind-blowing!

As an aside, Ella’s nipple clamps got me thinking about one of my current WIPs. Nipple clamps are exactly what a certain climactic scene needs. I don’t know how I didn’t see it. Thanks!

@Eosphorus - thank you so much 😊 Emily

I find so many series that start promisingly but then resort to re-working the original premise. This shows how to take what was a really good series and make it great. The change to Ella as the narrator, the move away from girl on girl action and the return of Ella's nerves as she encounters something she is unsure about were all wonderful additions. Definitely the best of the series so far.

@KayLocke - I came up with the idea of each FMC having a turn being the narrator fairly early on. It was fun - in a fabricated scenario - to write how my friend might see me. Some of the ‘hard yards’ were through my eyes. But I wanted a kinda crescendo, with switching to Ella as narrator being part of the climax. I guess it worked. 😊 Emily