by DJann
Couple things that irked me about this: -
1) The mom came across as a bit slutty, which I find a turn-off in a mom/son story, when it's not exclusively with the son. There was a mention of her fucking a random plumber. Barf!
2) The random ex ghosting him out of nowhere. What purpose does this serve? Why did she do that? Feels pointless to include this if you're not going to resolve that situation.
3) She overcame the "incest barrier" too easily. Didn't feel like there was any buildup. And goddamn he was annoying with the constant "MOM!" yells. Is he 12 or something?
Anyway, that's my take on it. At best it's average. Has potential though.
Nice story but my boy is a little wimpy though.Mom is practically fucking him and he just doesn't get the message.Very dense.