All Comments on 'After the Crash'

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Well written ! I hope you have an additional chapter coming.

BigDaddy318BigDaddy3184 months ago

Really enjoyed this story 😃

HotflixLustHotflixLust4 months ago

A son cumming inside his mom is the best thing ever 💦

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

A stroker for sure!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Couple things that irked me about this: -

1) The mom came across as a bit slutty, which I find a turn-off in a mom/son story, when it's not exclusively with the son. There was a mention of her fucking a random plumber. Barf!

2) The random ex ghosting him out of nowhere. What purpose does this serve? Why did she do that? Feels pointless to include this if you're not going to resolve that situation.

3) She overcame the "incest barrier" too easily. Didn't feel like there was any buildup. And goddamn he was annoying with the constant "MOM!" yells. Is he 12 or something?

Anyway, that's my take on it. At best it's average. Has potential though.

Grumpy1973Grumpy19734 months ago

Can't wait for a sequel.

DusterDDusterD4 months ago

Excellent story, great build up to the exciting sexual content.

More please

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Nice story but my boy is a little wimpy though.Mom is practically fucking him and he just doesn't get the message.Very dense.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good story. Curious why his girlfriend dumped him.

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