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Click hereCandy and her mother finally saw the humor. I swore before God, that if I live to be a hundred, every time I sat at this table I would remember this meal.
Candy came to what was now our bed. I made love to her, it wasn't the spontaneous sex like the night before. We took our time. She touched parts of my soul that had never been used before. I worshiped her with a passion that I'd never shown to anyone else. The banging headboard from the next room was hardly noticed.
The next morning when the cab arrived, we said our goodbyes to Ben and Cynthia. I made a promise to Ben to have a fresh stack of DVDs for their Christmas visit.
It had been one hell of an interesting week. I missed out on some of the football I had planned on. But, I did get an unexpected dividend, a sweet tooth. Yes that's what I said. A sweet tooth only Candy can satisfy.
- COMMENTS
Eegletechabout 8 hours agoI've read this many times, and I still cannot marvel at the fact that my favorite character is the little used dad.
feel_the_beast2 days agoI have to agree with other posters saying it would be much more credible for Candy to be bi, and he just didn't know that. Still a fun, funny little romance.
‘He had fought a bunch of oil well fires and roped a few rhinoceros with the Duke.’ “Hellfighters” and “Hatari”.
Richjason3 days agoThey are both naked in bed and she has little Don in her hand and big Don walks away? She got into his bed naked and he had no clue? It was a very well written and funny story. I think I am taking it too seriously.
Doug202412 days agoAnonymous is wrong. Love can happen quickly. I figured out I was in love with my wife during our second date. Of course we attended the same church for years. Still we were no more than acquaintances since she was 2 years and 4 months older than me. We traveled in different groups at church. I finally ask her out after another young lady at church. We married 6 and a half month after our first date almost 48 years ago.
Anonymous26 days agoI was already iffy after the guy took VICODIN for a bloody hangover (seriously??) and then the whole "feel guilty for masturbating about Candy" bit was just pathetic. Fantasy's are in your head.
Anonymousabout 1 month agoThree things I would have liked in this story:
- An interaction around how she was always bi, and he was just misinformed. That's very plausible, and changing orientation is not.
- A build up from lust to love. He lusted after her, which is not love. The story just jumped from 'she's hot' to 'I'm in love'. If the story is too short to make that transition, then leave it at 'falling in love' and 'infatuation'. Love take time.
- More pacing in general. The whole story feels a little bit rushed, which can work for a 'whirlwind romance' but in that case try to make it more visceral and immersive, I think.
I enjoyed it a lot anyhow, of course. Fun story with a nice ending.
(I promise I'm not actually anon - just forgot my password and not recovering it until I'm at my PC)
Richjasonabout 2 months agoThe writing was great. It reminded me of all the times as a young man, I tried to read a girl’s feelings for me. This is an all time favorite.
Wrstkrfftabout 2 months agoNicely told, fine plot and what really made it Perfect to me was the fun scenes included and the teasing for him. Alteady 5* from this, the only thing I ever so slightly missed would have been Candy explaining how and why she developed feelings for him. Whether it was him being so helpful, or because he didn‘t exploit her sleeping next to him…
Anyway, this made it into my favorite List - Thanks!
Anonymousabout 2 months agoGREAT LOVE STORY CANDY is going to be a great wife she will reaaly like to make Love. Great story ❤️💕💘. FIVE STARS❤️💕💘 GREAT WRITERp
