All Comments on 'All Under Control Ch. 01'

Absolutely brilliant, it’s very sexy and scorching hot! Always with the mindfuck *sigh*. Thanks for sharing Tess (uk)

Thanks for commenting! There's more mindfuck coming... stay tuned.

I really enjoyed that. Well done it was brilliant

Wowowow

Just so well done. Realistic af too. Good job and looking forward :)

Well, where would I start? This is absolutely the hottest almost orgasm-denial story. Making her wait longer and longer as he makes up the rules as they are going along. Wow! Very much appreciated.

Very very hot!

Terrific premise.

Interesting approach.

But sort of repetitious. Would have liked more involvement with her breasts. And her ass. Would have liked him to tell her to tease his cock very slowly -- with her mouth and her hands -- and imagine how good it was going to feel when he pushed his cock into her pussy. But didn't.

Four stars.

I'm glad this wasn't a mean denial, denial, denial, no payoff story. What's the sense in that.

Ok, I have a new kink unlocked. Now I just need to convince my wife she wants this.

Very well done. The construction was perfect.

The "lack" of communication about her needs, wants and desires, yet at the same time in the end she has told him everything that he needs to know, shown him exactly why and how much this matters to her, and how personal and deep this need is... very sexy, very well done, powerful and fun! :)

This made me feel things… I love it.

Great relationship dynamics. Like the balance between careful, cruel, playful and loving.

Really well written,