All Comments on 'Amber's Ambush Ch. 03'

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walt555walt555over 1 year ago

Gods I love these two, hoping for more.

DaymosDaymosover 1 year ago

I just reread the whole story, along with this chapter. The whole thing is written so nicely and so erotically that I wish I could be Nicky. I can't wait what else you've got planned for this lovely couple. Well, I hope Nicky gets 'real' fake boobs XD Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Absolutely love all your stories, I seem to want to appear as one of your characters. Just love the way you write. Hmm,I appear to be learning more about myself, Thankyou πŸ’•

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

As always 5 stars! I love your work. I would like to see a slow transformation for Nici. But what ever you decide I'm πŸ’― sure will be fantastic.

Whiter59Whiter59over 1 year ago

5 star get a real boob job finish the transformation, out out to everyone, and get married.

AndriaJaneAndriaJaneover 1 year ago

Execellent story. I would love to see Nicky come fully out as a girl, have a boob job and to marry Amber.

It's not stated if Amber is taking hormones, but given the extra curves I would suspect she is and therefore Nicky should also start taking them.

My personal preference is always for full conversion but I appreciate it's not for everyone. As such it would be good if one, if not both, of them has bottom surgery.

Cadian122Cadian122over 1 year ago

I'm loving this series, please keep it going.

LatexZashaLatexZashaabout 1 year ago

Boob job and official name change would be a wonderful chapter.

AnonfirefighterAnonfirefighterabout 1 year ago

I’ll be honest I’m new to this series but wow it’s hot!!! I hope we don’t have to wait till August for the next instalment!!, πŸ†πŸ‘πŸ†πŸ‘πŸ†πŸ‘

TeriLeighTeriLeigh10 months ago

Hi there girlfriend, I hope that I can call you that. I have read a few of your works of art. Actually, I love your writing so very much that I am reading your complete portfolio, or is library more appropriate? I have commented once or twice prior to this. I was going to wait until I read ALL of your works of art before I made any more comments. But I couldn't hold back any more. I feel like I am about to explode, like Nicky when Amber is deep inside her. I am 64, just lost 200 pounds in pursuit a feminine body and I identify with Nicky down to my core. Thank you!!!! As my tears of joy fall. 😊

GearheadscGearheadsc10 months ago

You're quickly becoming one of my favorite writers here! I hope this series continues.

LatexZashaLatexZasha10 months ago

Please continue this story. I would love to see Nikki go through her transformation, and possibly becoming a mom and wife.

pantyboy47pantyboy479 months ago

What was the secret sauce she was feeding him at the start

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I love this, as I do most of your stories. I have never been topped, so, exciting to read about it and imagine it. I already am very oral and love jizz, so that part I have covered.

SuddenlyMaddieSuddenlyMaddie4 months ago

The exploration of Nicki's sexual appetite along with her gender is a nice touch. I would love to see more of the social aspects, like meeting the families, overcoming or accepting whatever the fallout might be, the misunderstandings that can break hearts and weld the pieces back together in a beautifully imperfect mosaic. I love your writing and the stories you tell. Please never stop.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This is an absolutely wonderfully hot storyline. I could not have enjoyed it more. Crissy

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Authors Notes: Thanks so much for your patience. I have lots of projects going on, so bear with me if your favorite isn't moving as fast as you like. More coming from Granger and her crew(chapter three is finally moving again. It's been long enough). Amber is getting one m...

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