All Comments on '"Arresting" Officer'

Righteous shoot all the way.

Thanks so much for a fun story and no technical errors on the Glock and such.

Hi.. its so lovely and erotic and shooting positives vibes on the reader

Thanks

-Neo

Wonderful story! Good build and scene set, good balance between erotic and life and best of all, no "Suspense of disbelief" for me. One of my top 3 stories on here! Thank you!!

Good story - really enjoyed it

Thanks

nice tale but what does he do for a living? doesn`t matter I guess but

I think small bits like that add to the tale.

I loved it!!

You have been peeking into my life ilikeithot6308! Shakespeare was right, and she was right now. Alas, we did not last. But oh, those memories remain. Back in the days when the "Lady Smith" ruled and the "Glock" was but a girl. Be well!

Hot as hell. Hope you write like that. Ladycop story.

Fun story, it made me smile.

Good story - but also would have liked a few more details - such as his name

Obviously, I can't zip my pants because your story gave me such an erection I'll have to masturbate three times to make it soften so I can!!!!! This one is really hot and really got to me for some reason - they usually don't have that effect. If this is your normal style of writing I'll have to look you up instead of only reading chick's stories!

Extremely sexy. Nice to see someone write about the human aspect of a police officer, and not just portray the popo in a negative light. This is one of my favorite stories on here.

I loved this story. Hot and hotter!! Keep up the good work.

I liked it.

It works - even without the sex.

Smooth writing, great action and a love story at the end.

Brilliant.

You're a fine writer, and most of your stories that I've read involve greater character development than this one. But beyond character development, the key to a really good story is to have some sort of meaningful conflict ending with a resolution. This story had no real conflict. It was much more of a stroke story. And of course that's a specialty for this site. But you've shown an ability to take stories to the next level.

I didn't rate it at all, because I saw the high rating and don't want to spoil that for you. It's just not my cup of tea. Your longer stories usually hit the spot for me. Keep up the good work - just remember the need for a conflict and its resolution. Thanks for sharing.

Great build up. Love that there was no sadness just all love. Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!

Definitely sequel worthy.

Thanks. tom anon

A fun read. I would like to read more like it.

I have always liked "cop stories".

Great story but the Lit app version is truncated at "blast of".

sequel,

Sure hope there's more to this

One of my favorite.

I've only read a few stories by ilikeithot6308 but they all have been well-constructed and grammatical, I envy the guy in the story.

Very cute and sweet story of love. Very sexy too!! Loved the interaction between the two characters.

Author, Great story, great plot, great characters led to a solid five throughout. Thank you for the romp which I truly enjoyed. MORE! jntiques

As I said, good story, but the cop talk and gun references in the bedroom didn't make it for me.

Very good

Good story but don't know enough about them to care. What does he do for a living? Why is he at home all the time? Yeah, he writes but about what? They got into the sack in record time. Is this normal for them? She's a cop, seems unlikely that someone as hot as she is described, doesn't have the entire police force filling her date book, hence not available for a last minute date.

It was my dream come true. To fall in love with that much passion.

Good story look forward to the next one.

I love the interaction between them with the "kidnapped" thong. Good dialogue!

This story has a nice pace and flow. Keep writing!

your story is great, I would have felt good to know a bit more about him. As mentioned in another comment, they seemed to end up in bed very quickly. However, please keep the stories coming.

... little love story with for definitely hot sex scenes ~ thank you! NEXT!!

Lovely story. Fun, adult, kind, respectful, ultimately loving, and really, really good, enjoyable sex. More by this author, please. Soon!

It went awfully quick, and she seemed to fall in his bed before knowing anything about him. No character development, and 90% of the “story” was sex... neither is particularly likable. Unrated

Nice, fun, well put together story. Looking forward to the sequel

That quote would be from Shakespeare if he lived mid 19th century under the name of Tennyson.

It’s not about romance either. It’s memorial of a life-long friendship between two Victorian era men. One of whom had just died.

The double mis-attribution is exceedingly common. This comment does not intend to diminish either its use here or the whimsical tone of your story.

In Memorium AHH

Alfred Lord Tennyson

Them, and the dialogue, and their matching supercharged libidos and the 'pressurized jets of goo...'....

I pace myself with your stories-not one yet I didn't like, if not love

another 5, and fave

Fast and furious style, well written and with tight dialogue. Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter.

"It went awfully quick, and she seemed to fall in his bed before knowing anything about him." to quote one Anonymous. Nevertheless I liked the fast pace and still resolved to give it a 4. Nice job and I shall check out a few others of yours. Thanks for sharing.

this is a great read. Could have been better if the story had developed more before they ended up in bed. Still a great one.

Pure fantasy.

the little details that make this a must read. Quick build up and bang on climax!! Easy 5

This story is as well built and expertly told as any of the others I have read by this author. It is a boy meets girl, boy and girl have incredible sex a few times and seemingly live happily ever after. But there is a sense of romance that permeates the thing that makes the story so much better.

THANKS

Liked the story, hoever the two characters could have been developed deeper.. All in all for a 3 chapter story it was good.

Really enjoyed this story. Interesting characters, well paced, and humorous in the right places. The sexcapades are nicely described and each one left me anxiously awaiting the next. A fine all around effort.

i'm gonna read every one of your stories!

I just loved it!!

Unfortunately,unlike a lot of readers ,it didnt ring my bell.

Great story, well written. 5/5

DISGUSTING !!!.......Pepsi??? FFS. Good read. 😁

just over the top sex, not much plot

Beautifully written

Your stories are always such a fun read. And the sex is pretty hot also.

Very good read, just pulled me in, incredibly gripping wordplay.5*

Very good read. I'll give you 5 for this.

I thought it was soon HOT!! I loved all the little details describing their action!! I wanted to be there with them, licking and sucking!! I'm a newby to this site, but will most definitely be warmly waiting on some more from this writer!! Yum!!

Great/excellent love story.

I loved it!

Fun!!

Unbelievable, but fun!!

The love part felt rushed, unless you just didn't show the progression of time that well? But, to be fair, having been in the Army while we were at war sometimes it happens that way. Live fast, die fast or whatever.

This was such a an awesome story!!!!!!!