All Comments on 'Birdwatching'

Nicely written story with the juxtaposition of the personal narratives and their (countering) relation to reality.

Well done!

I shall look into more of your stories.

Outstanding. I am UP for more of your stories.

Loved the story & what a beautiful girl - Jen 😘😘

i love looking for tits in the woods

Wonderful hobby!

Such a great story of a beautiful woman exploring her sensuality in nature. With a silent observer to see her. I wonder if she would have continued knowing she had an audience.

Clever interweaving of two points of view, with arousing photos to enhance the narrative.

idk man i personally like it better when its just text and no images. Leaves more of the story up to your imagtination rather than a photo. Porn photos should stay in their area and erotica separate too.

This story is so hot for me - I love the photography and the vivid descriptions of how slowly she undressed and how beautifully she enjoyed being naked and masturbating. The fact that the birdwatcher is watching and she is imagining what it would be like if she was being watched adds such a strong current of passionate intensity to this piece. I am happily playing naked here as I read it. It's so good, I'm going back to read it again, with my happily persistent penis in hand. The combination of the wonderful pictures and your excellent prose is HOT!

Very well written in content and mechanics with a perfect flow.

Absolutely beautiful! 🥰

This was so good, I'm going to have my wife and I read it in bed as the characters. I'll watch her doing what he witnessed and then she can watch me doing what the main character was doing. I can't wait!

I like sps314's idea. My wife and I sometimes read Literotica stories to one another as foreplay and this story really lends itself to a his and hers narration and accompanying role play. Thank you, MusicmakerUK.

Well written, erotic and arousing!