All Comments on 'Bouncing Back Ch. 02'

Heading in a very promising direction.

Wonderful as ever Emily :)

@Rainyday493 - thank you 😊 Emily

@Bazzle - thank you 😊 Emily

I have enjoyed your story to this point. I'm hoping the Cathy quickly figures out what is important to her and the impact her decision may have on the rest of her world (Kids, Husband, Friends, etc)

@AccelarVester - that’s the plan for chapter 3 (and maybe 4) 😊 Emily

"No, wait... There has to be more. It can't stop here. There has to be a page three. It can't be over."

Yeah, I'm completely enthralled with this story. Some of your best writing.

@ShelbyDawn57 - thank you 😊 There will be a chapter three (which might even have some sex in it) and maybe a chapter four. Feels like my ideas are growing wider. I know the ending, just how to get there in a way that honors all the characters. Emily

The temperature is rising. We would all like to see some lesbian "friendship"

@Arch33 - sorry to edge you - lots of fun in chapter three, I promise 😊 Emily

I really like the window you are giving into Cathy’s mind as she slowly succumbs to her desire for Cathy.

Better late than never with this comment I suppose, but beta reading for you gets easier each time, because your writing just gets better each time.

@toesucker1 - thank you 😊 Emily

@Djmac1031 - thank you 😊 Emily

I suspect that these kind of feelings occur more often than we would like. The pressures of everyday married life with kids allows us to get out of the sensual world we started out with. Not sure that Sarah is the best medicine for Cathy, but I guess she is going to find out.

@Campus77 - I talked to a bunch of parents, plus I guess my own observations (and tropey TV stuff 😬) Emily

Yeah, this is workin’ for me…

@Victoria14xs - thanks, sweetie 😊 Emily

This has to be one of the best builds ups I have read. Irrespective if it is long or short, if it is well written, like this and the previous chapter it doesn't matter. The sexual tension and angst felt by Cathy and the way you leave the reader hanging Emily for the next chapter is spot on!! **

@Anon - I hope Ch. 03 delivers for you 😊 Emily

"It felt like that spark was located somewhere else". Good one. It seems you always have a clever line or two that sets your stories apart. Well done.

@ccitydude - thank you 😊 Emily

This story got me. You write beautifully. Waiting for the next part, you're doing a good job.

@Anon - thank you 😊. I have the next two chapters plotted out and sections written. My next project after my work in progress story. Emily

I am into the story. You do a great job revealing Cathy’s thoughts and inner struggles. Looking forward to what’s next.

@Boots4hikes - thank you - I have it all plotted out 😊 Emily

This build-up is wonderful. I can empathize with Cathy’s growing obsession and arousal. I’ve experienced all of this. It’s dangerous but oh so wonderful.

@JordynsCanvas - thank you so much 😊 Emily

Another terrific chapter in this love story by the author. The build-up is wonderfully written. I can understand the struggles that Cathy is experiencing. Again, the story is plausible and believable. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Thank you for your beautiful writing.