by Swampcooler
What a great story about two lovers in love! Are there any more chapters? I sure hope so!
Absolutely fantastic! I loved how there wasn't the constant mention of race or use of derogatory names like in other books based in this time frame or location. It was relatable and heart felt. A feel good story from all angles. Thank you.
Navy speak for well done Swampcooler!!
Looking forward to reading more of your stories.
Add you to my Author and Story page.
Keep up the excellent writing..
you write more on Bettina and Travis. You wove a very realistic and compelling story. I sure loved how they got to know each other, took some time to do it and then how she hooked up with him without her parent's approval--and Travis won them over by getting them out of that jam. Very plausible and seemingly quite original to me. Loved their chemistry and how you described their sex. A 5 hands down. :)
When I was looking through the different stories something told me that I have to read this story. Its not often that you feel like standing besides the actors and feel like them. Wonderful story where everything is like in normal live...
Def worth a few more chapters. This is one of the best or stories I've read in here. I, and others, look forward to ready more from you.
Absolutely awesome story! More chapters, please... Including the proposal and wedding.
This was great! I agree that a few more chapters need to be written. Great story line couldn't be better
Excellent story, so glad he found his bliss. Wondering if there's another chapter coming? Five Stars!
Lovely story! Want to read more, especially about Travis and Bettina's babies!
Now this was a great story,I've read this before and it was just as good as the first time I read it,,,It does not matter
what colors you are,love does not judge,,,This should have been made in a novel as its great,,,
Great romantic story! This also means the story can be part of Romance category.
What a wonderful read. I was touched when you added the dog to the "threesome" (LOL). It is a wonderfully written story that you can feel the emotions of all the characters. I was grateful that you didn't "oversize" the characters attributes. It is rare to see that. Thanks.
Really enjoyable read, great characters and a perfect balance throughout
Dimes ---Well it was written about a different time.
Lord that we had such people and love today
lots of us all twisted up with self-importance and hate.
Doesn't do anybody any good
Excellent story. Thought perhaps they'd marry but it's not important for the story. Obviously in love and other things will work out. 5 ⛤
10 STARS
Very nice story. Love has no color, heart and soul is the only thing that matters.