All Comments on 'Caleb 09 - Training and Sharing'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The emotions this brings out are truly something else. The descriptions of each individual and how they are giving and receiving makes me wish this was a real thing because to feel that amount of deep love and caring has got to be heavenly. Thanks for posting this.

LexlederLexlederover 2 years ago

Super Story. Ich liebe den Aufbau von Calebs erwachen seiner Macht und dessen Verantwortung.

Toll geschrieben weiter so. I love it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow.

Next you're writing some Darkover fan-fiction?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The love. The emotion. The thoughts. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Tx_Emt53Tx_Emt53almost 2 years ago

I am not into the guy/guy thing and this is my first time reading this one. All in all a good story,

Lolilol47Lolilol47over 1 year ago

Thank you for the chapter! I really appreciate the story and the work you put behind it! (coming from storiesonline where we cannot write a comment per chapter but only at the end...)

rickydean56rickydean56over 1 year ago

Damn you! I really want to read more but the gay male crap turns me off so much I can't continue. I tried scrolling fast through the scenes but it didn't help. The story seems to be a seduction into accepting things I detest. I am done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

@rickydean56 - sounds like some latent homophobia you could probably do some introspection on; "detest" is a pretty strong characterization

Smartest1Smartest1over 1 year ago

The green monster, again. (sexual) partners as possession....

Hypocracy and double, if not triple, standards. (re) action, rather than seeing issues in perspective.

Anyway... Am glad it is addressed in the story.

mikkemusmikkemusabout 1 year ago

Not much fan of the m/m stuff, and that initially turned me away from this story after starting to read the first chapter, but i decided to just scroll trough it. Otherwise a great story, i really like that you progress the story along with the sex scenes.

Brandon11Brandon11about 1 year ago
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I’m really enjoying this series, like the last commenter I’m not big on m/m but it has its place here! Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The harem stuff doesn’t bother me but I hate the m/m and cheating/sharing stuff!

It’s such a shame. The plot of this story is really interesting and really good, but I’m not sure I can stomach reading the rest of the story to get to it.

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