All Comments on 'Chapter 07'

Your chapters are getting progressively worse. They are not long enough and do not hold enough details/information to keep a reader attentive or interested.

I wish Literotica made it a little easier to consolidate things, but I think because they have to be so strict about what they allow to make it to "published," it requires their process to be a little unforgiving. Non-erotic sci-fi isn't for everyone. If it feel rocky or like the details are getting lost, it's definitely something for me to consider moving forward. Hopefully the story gets better later in the series.

Even the comments posting is a little unforgiving as I can't even go back and fix grammatical error in my comment without deleting the entire story (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻

Again - I hope you decide to keep reading and I always enjoy getting feedback, even if the feedback is criticism.