by RibaldWriter
This story keeps getting better and better. Keep up the good work and give us more.
Your stories continue to be interesting. You have a great imagination in keeping SG story ideas but expending on them. Keep thinking that way.
I have been debating about expressing my opinion but I hope you will take as JUST my opinion. I question whether Carter would jump into bed with someone she just met. I agree with her idea of having an heir and the idea of using in vitro sounds like a Carter thing. I really expected (hoped) she would convince O'Neill of maybe Sheppard to do this or another of her old friends. IMHO this would have been more typical of her to do. I know this is a moot point since it's already written, but as I said, just my 2 cents, worth exactly what you paid for it.
Cisco ruined this for me. Good reading up to that point. Thanks for the story, I'd been missing the SG universe but don't usually read fanfic. This was fun.