All Comments on 'Daughters' Domain'

Super fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Very hot.

Incredibly hot! Man, how do you keep turning out this stuff that's so perfect? You are my absolute favorite writer! Don't ever stop!

Took me a while to click the MC was not the wife, looking to be a girlfriend.

Still, the manner in which Blake ignored her was beginning to irritate me especially when the MC just observed it in a casual manner.

At that point, I began to skip the story lines as Blake and Hadley's behavior was callous and rude.

Yes, the sexual tension was high but the delivery was inhumane.

A beautiful story that was very well told. 5*

Hot for sure! But the sexual parts could have gone deeper and evolved further. A nice read nonetheless.

Needs more stars

This was a wonderful work. I plan on reading more of your works.

I agree with Lechemans comment. There was no need to be rude by ignoring the mc

I like how this author describes events, provides details, and builds up the action. I quite easily rated this story a four. An abundance of pussy hair, sopping wet on one or both females, would have been a five!

I liked this story a lot, reminded me of the time when my stepdaughter told me she had accidentally saw me and her father in the living room one night. I told her I was sorry that that happened, and we would be more careful in the future. She just kind of said nothing for a few seconds staring at me then she said, and I am quoting her exact words to the best of my ability. Words that I will never forget, "I promise I won't tell dad or anyone else if you will let me eat your pussy some, just a few times today, while he is at work, no one will ever know and you don't have to do me, I just want to do your pussy some today. That blond hair, I have eat out the black and brown haired and shaved pussies, before but not a blond one. I have wanted to ask for days. Can we, I will, you don't have to eat me back. I want to eat your pussy and pretend like you are my real mom. I pushed her on the sofa and eat her first.

Wonderful, exquisite storytelling. So beautifully "composed", so perfect.

There are not enough superlatives, to describe your story.

The splendid example of what an erotic story can be, as apposed to superficial porn stories.

Superb.

MORE than 5 STARS.

Good one. Now keep us posted on your Daddy claiming his Baby girl & planting his seed in her fertile ground to grow his Baby in his Baby! Totally FUCKING HOT! 5☆

Great!

For me, it’s a good story, but it doesn’t draw me in like your other stories! 👋🏼👋🏼😁😁

Please write Pam and her dad next!

Excellent story, absolutely brilliant, although it could have been longer, much longer, tieing up her relationship with her own father, 5 stars

Short and quick but full of emotion. Excellent writing.

Truly one of your best, and a different twist on the genre. Well done.

bravo, great story, nice build up

Chapter 3...Pam and Daddy invite Blake and Hadley out to dinner...

Great stuff!! Could’ve been longer could’ve been more with all three of them together and then adding her and her father reunion but overall great stuff!

Such a short but great story. It had an unexpected but quite enjoyable twist in it too.