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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Not a bad story. But if this is the last chapter it could have ended better.

JusticeMonkJusticeMonkover 7 years ago
Good story

I'm going to skip any comments about grammar and punctuation. By now, I'm sure you heard enough. Good story, but the ending is a little abrupt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good story!

Agree with the comments the ending was a bit abrupt! Maybe just a good way to lead in to "book 2"??

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
NEXT PART

Please post the next part soon

DarkmantimDarkmantimover 5 years ago
Great story

You have written a great story. Is there going to be another chapter?

Brandon11Brandon11almost 5 years ago
For the love of Lana

This was a good story and more chapters would be awesome.

jskin78jskin787 months ago

You need to continue this story. The ending just sucked. Add a part two or something.

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Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...

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