All Comments on 'Harem House - Selene Pt. 13'

Even though there is no sex, I enjoyed this chapter as it sets the scene for what comes next.

I love your stories! Please don't stop until it's complete, that would suck... it's such an amazing story!

The difference in how they both get ready for the date is hilarious and a fantastic bit of characterisation, well done

This is fast becoming a great story even though the first few chapters were a bit slow and boring. You’ve getting some good characters and the storyline is getting interesting though predictable. I hope there a twist to it at the end. I’d LMAO if he actually marries Lori and she become the Mistress.. Either way I can’t wait for the next chapter…⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I thought for sure Mindy would feign running late to get Arthur to come up to the dorm room where all three would be waiting for him...

Just binged the first 13 installments and have been thoroughly entertained. Some quality writing and reasonable editing. SirAeghann is developing interesting characters and story threads within the BDSM-harem tropes and I am curious about where and how this all goes. The MC is a nice guy but damaged. He does not seem to realize how much. He doesn't need to develop into the common Alpha-hole but shouldn't default to be the clueless naif Arty either. A shy Korean freshman from a traditional upbringing has to throw herself at him even though he has been told to take control? He seems to think that he is a very mature college Senior, similar to his 30ish boss Beth. However, he forgets about his slave even knowing she may harm herself with her devotion. He doesn't control his rage at his parent's house or before his CNC episode with Selene. Is Arthur capable of love? He seems to care for or about Lori, Selene, and maybe others, but how much and how deep? He has little reaction to being forgiven for stalkerish behavior in HS? How bad was he, or how entitled is Laura? I am curious about the backstory and what happens next. I am interested in seeing if Selene becomes more of a switch as she develops the harem. Will Brat continue to explore submission? Are Kelly/Katelyn a sometime couple? Do either/both join the harem? Does Beth act on her attraction? Does a lesbian join the house with her bi girlfriend? What are Mindy's kinks? Do the Kats recruit fellow volleyballers? Is this story polyamory with other males involved or classic harem? I am enjoying Sir's storytelling and look forward to further entries. Thank you SirAeghann!

This story is absolutely fantastic!!! Can't wait for more!!

Very good story. An easy 5 stars.

Great story! Lots of vivid imagery in this story. Binged on the story and sad that I only have one left to be caught up. I need to read slower or SirAeghann needs to write faster!

An 18-year old with extensive BDSM experience… she’s not a prize. Chapters are getting too long for the ground covered…

Mindy is a surprise package — from a traditional Korean family but with significant BDSM experience, and still only 18.

It's apparent to me that the author knows a whole lot more about Korean anime than he does about bowling: House balls top out at 16 lbs, and Mindy would need to find her own ball, since the weight and finger-hole spacing need to be comfortable for her. Also, Arthur seems to mark every frame, which strains credulity given that he's a casual bowler.

Anonymous, I just used the bowling alley near me and personal experiences as reference, but yes, Arthur is good at bowling. It's like... his only sport. There are backstory reasons I probably should have brought up here and haven't had a chance to get into yet with the rest of the series, but it's a fair critique. My focus on this scene was less about their scoring and more about them scoring.