by karina_jayde
A very good start. One minor quibble though, our hero left his pack and boots beside the lake before he swam to the island. But in the last scene they were in her room.
Very well written. You have a talent for smoothly bringing the readers into your world.
You build a very colorfull world in very few words. Look forward to the next chapters. This is very well written.
Wow! So much heart, soul, and thought went into this wonderful tale. Thank you.
This story has the recipe for epicness. I enjoyed the prequel but this could be on a different level. A lot of different ways for story development. And I can't help but ship for a reunion of Caderyn and Solveig.