All Comments on 'Knight of Lust Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Thanks for the chapter

Continue on

Cheers!

dontyouwishyouknewdontyouwishyouknew3 months ago

A very good start. One minor quibble though, our hero left his pack and boots beside the lake before he swam to the island. But in the last scene they were in her room.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Very well written. You have a talent for smoothly bringing the readers into your world.

BanesonBaneson3 months ago

You build a very colorfull world in very few words. Look forward to the next chapters. This is very well written.

AahhWhattheHellAahhWhattheHell3 months ago

Wow! So much heart, soul, and thought went into this wonderful tale. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous16 days ago

This story has the recipe for epicness. I enjoyed the prequel but this could be on a different level. A lot of different ways for story development. And I can't help but ship for a reunion of Caderyn and Solveig.

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April 8 Update: the 15th and final chapter of 'Knight of Lust' has been submitted. Due to its length, editing and proofreading took a bit longer. I have a few other stories in the works, including a planned sequel to 'Knight of Lust.'

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