All Comments on 'M Division'

I read about half of the first page before giving up. I wanted to give it a fair shot but this is a bit too extreme for me. Body Modification is just not my thing, it’s just as gross and monstrous an image doing that to a man as it is doing it to a woman.

Of the SAS guys I’ve met there isn’t one who would agree to this not for any amount of money. It’s way too implausible to be taken seriously as a story concept.

Tess (UK)

This could go in interesting directions. Unfortunately it desperately needs editing, especially for punctuation and some missing words.