- Non-Erotic
- Majgen Ch. 016
- Page 6
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Click here"I'm sorry," repeated Aejoa.'Why wasn't I more careful? I accelerated the process.'
"It's not your fault. Don't blame yourself," Majgen managed to squeeze out. "Grief, Aejoa. I can't fight it back. It's too soon. I don't want to die!"
'Ask for it, ask for it,' she thought.
"No!" she said.
'Yes!' she thought.
"Touch me again, Aejoa."
"How?"
"Just touch me!" she demanded.
"Are you sure, Little Human?"
"Yes! Touch menow!"
And he did.
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Copyright of Nanna Marker
For those of little faith: No, the Majgen-series has not changed to become erotica. Yes, there is a good explanation for how Majgen attained this illness. (Be patient, for those who have not yet guessed how this came to be, the explanation will be made -- far later). No, I couldn't simply cut her ailment out of the storyline to keep the story truly non-erotic.
For those of excessive faith: No, I cannot rush this book to its finish. Book two is complex, slow to write. And I am complex... slow at writing :(
For all that reads: Please comment. If you read this far, you must have something to say. Even if it's simply, 'Enjoyed it, keep going' or 'Booooring.' I'd like to know how you feel. (Not to mention I'd like to count how many of you there are! Lit often swipes votes so I can't use those to count.)
I am not opposed to anonymous public comments! (Not opposed to non-anonymous ones either.)
Votes comes and goes (they are better than nothing, but they get swiped regularly and it only takes one troll to destroy an average), comments are forever!
Unless a beta-reader informs me of too grievous problems in future chapters, steady posting should be possible until at least chapter 022 before the next long agonising wait.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoI have read extensively in my nearly 74 years of living, and find your description of interaction with an alien species imaginative, intriguing, and admirable. I confess I cannot see a solution to Majen's dilemma. Hope you can!
ellyneiover 13 years agoAuthorBack when I was posting 'Majgen', the literotica toplist for non-erotic did not distinguish between highly read/highly voted stories and less read/less voted stories. The majgen chapters with their few, but high-starred, votes filled a lot of spots on the nonerotic toplists. Upon realising, I wouldn't be posting the full story on lit after all, I turned off the voting option for 'Majgen' to get it off those toplists for new readers to less likely stumble upon it.
As for those non-majgen stories that cannot be voted upon, well for those the voting option was taken off preemptively in a period where many authors suffered from troll attacks. Those were cases of me wanting to preserve my hard-earned red H's ;)
My fears of trolling has been unwarranted, as I'm still awaiting the first genuine troll attack. Very few read my stories, so I figure I am too insignificant for anyone to bother ;)
Sylithover 13 years agoI have to admit to really enjoying several other authors here and haven't decided which is my favorite but your story is obviously publishable and deserves more attention. Just curious why we can't vote on your stories, is it because they are on hold?
ellyneiover 16 years agoAuthorSorry people the full story will not be posted online. Don't start reading, contact me if you want word once it is available in book form, in the far future.
theMasterBaiterover 16 years agoThis is just the most nail biting chapter yet! WoW! That was GREAT!
amigoid4over 16 years agoI am troubled by the acceptance of violence in this story. If you plan on some twist to explain it all away, it is overdue in my opinion anyway. My military training and experience makes it hard for me to accept the use of physical assault to either train someone or to obtain information. It doesn't work.
Shayanielover 16 years agoAnother long and beautiful chapter in Majgen's story,
and I must say, I didn't expect it *that* soon.
However it was - of course! - appreciated.
And well noone needs faith, a little erotic thingy here or there won't hurt, will it? (I mean, we are literotica here, not? *ggg*)
So, again, I thoroughly want to thank you for the great chapter!
Can't wait for more, but hey, there's nothing I can do about it from my end, so I'll just learn patience and wait for your next chapter!
Another Yay to you,
Cheers
-Shaya
Malkorover 16 years agoHow much I enjoy your work. I am very glad to see that regular posting of chapters will continue. We'll just have to see what we can do about encouraging your creativity to continue flowing so that more chapters are ready to post by the time we get to 22.
Anonymousover 16 years agoThis story has me hooked! Please continue to write. Hope to read more soon.
Anonymousover 16 years agomoremoremoremoremore.. so how much time will there be between each chapter (till ch.22)?
ed44over 16 years agoThis story has touched me in a way that nothing has before. The story of the underdog fighting her/his way to do something heroic on a cosmic scale! Please keep these episodes coming!
Thanks!
