All Comments on 'Majgen Ch. 017'

i can't wait to read the rest of it,

i have some questions, but i have a feeling that they'll be answered in time. <3

I thought the first chapters were very good, but so sad in the treatment of Majgen. These last two chapters have been wonderful. She is learning to accept herself. I love her interaction with the Winin and with Joone. I can't wait for more.

Is Majgen going to end up causing some sort of spiritual revolution among the yijeo? Seems like she might end up starting some sort of spiritual movement.

your story has evolved so much i cant wait for the next chapters!

to more. But that's hardly a news flash.

This is one of the most original SF romances I've ever read. It is interesting how well you're able to balance so many flawed and imperfect humans and aliens. In the end, we're all just looking for love and acceptance. I really enjoyed the previous work, but the last two chapters have been extra special.

Majgen is embedded in a strongly power-oriented society, and her mission hasn't changed a bit - break some of the rules and bring other values than tradition or respect of authority to the fore.&#10;&#10;A lovely heroine, inded.

Really, thanks for putting up these chapters even though book two isn't done yet. Majden is really a one in a kind story that I look forward to reading more of.

Sorry I haven't been commenting, I'm more of a lurker around here :P

I hate to post a comment when I don't have anything to say. Your tale started slowly, but gather speed and fit right into its own pace. You are doing very well. Believe me, if the folks on this site don't like your writing, they will be very quick to point out your failures as an author, even if they have to make something up!

Hang in there.

i like it

For anyone with an insecurity or deeply hurt feelings, having the psychological injury fully mended would be wonderful. This story appeals to that fantasy, the wish that trauma to the psyche could be repaired. How special indeed it might be if even one person in the world could do that!

This is a delightfully imaginative and insightful story. I cannot wait to see what direction it takes.

Are there any words of praise that could properly convey just how delectable is this tale?

Your chapters are alway worth the wait. I look forward to the next one. Your characters are well rounded and all in all a delight.

I love it more and more... the hints of sexuality aren't bad either - I have to agree with Shaya!

I can't really think why she is addicted (although it can be really nice in general... ;op) since her experience wasn't that great so far but I am guessing it has something to do with Hawlun. Am I right?

Keep on writing - I am looking forward to read more...

- Alaniel

Perfect! I have no words to praise you sense of fiction!

Sorry people the full story will not be posted online. Don't start reading, contact me if you want word once it is available in book form, in the far future.

you use words and concepts so well. amazing, assuming that english is not your first language even.

This chapter perhaps gave me the biggest surprise so far. In the first chapter I thought Majgen probably had a very strong power and/or an unique power. She has both. The surprise was that her power was also unique to the yejijos. She cured a psychological problem for a yejijo ( the apprentice). Really enjoying the story.