All Comments on 'Mick the Stick'

Good story keep going

Sweet. I like Mick. She has spunk and can apparently throw a nice punch. My kind if girl.

Wish it was longer, everything happened rather suddenly. No real character development or arcs.

I gave it 5 stars, but it could have been so much more if you didnt rush it

Enjoyable tale, even with Cam getting played early on. What transpired with Mick made up for the bad times and Eli getting the shaft of his own from Cam’s other betrayers made for sweet revenge even if Cam didn’t want it. Mick was a good character and Cam came out of it to the good in the end. Great job.

cute but too easy. He gets his heart torn out but of course the girl next door is waiting for him and is perfect.

Nicely done, thought for sure I knew where this was going with the family tragedy and the brother /sister, but then threw a curve ball with the neighbor girl and the messed up engagement. Could have used some more details but overall a good job.

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Cheers

Was a 4 until the last paragraph. 5* rounding up. LOL

I really enjoyed this story. I wish it was a little longer .

I did give the story 5 stars all the same

Enjoyed this story. Wish it was a little bit longer.

Still have it 5 stars

Good story! Thank you. 5 BIG FAT STARS!

Felt rushed. Mostly well written. Cam's little speech to Eli at the end was a little too proper. It didn't come off as natural. Violence isn't cool, but I very much enjoyed Mick decking her brother.

I help love your stories! Each and every one of them!

Except, the speech that was given to Eli was a speech that even a rational person would not have given. If Eli was in the house, there is absolutely no way that Mick, or especially Cam would be willing to be in the house when he was present. It is not an issue of being cordial to him, but just not willing to be near him at all while he is there. If Mick’s parents wanted to see either of them, they could go next door while Cam was working on the house. Or visit Mick in her apartment. (obviously this was before them deciding to move in together next door.)

As I said, at the start, I have loved all of your stories, and this is the only major criticism I have ever had in any of them. Thank you so much for sharing with us your stories, the time you have put into them, and I hope that you know how much we appreciate reading them.

Daniel

Certainly could been filled out a little more, but good, nonetheless. 5

Good one mate

Nice, but the story kind of felt like wham bam alakazam, the end. LM

Too rushed. 4 stars.

Wow, great. Just too short, and the ending seemed rushed. Would have liked at least a bit more !

Good tale. While I can understand Cam's ongoing problems with him, Eli wasn't completely at fault. I could def see a follow up burn Nina and Ryleigh episode done from Eli's POV. Maybe with a little help from Mick and Cam.

Thanks for writing and sharing.