All Comments on 'My Divorced Neighbor: The Beginning'

Nice start up. Lots of room for story development, like perhaps his wife's love life too. thanks

guick and easy

We want moooore!

Brilliant but I was hoping for more detail 😘😘😘

After this introductory tease you’d better be planning an incredible sex scene! More!

34DD. Have you no imagination or descriptive talents beyond listing a bra size? And a retired married guy whose wife still enjoys sex goes after a 50-something year old woman with immense breasts harnessed in a bikini (it seems to be important), chucking his commitment to his wife and family?

If he were divorced/widowed, and the homewrecker simply had a beautiful body, maybe I'd want to read more, maybe I wouldn't feel the need for a brain douche now.

1 star.

Pretty lousy characters, or maybe just a lousy writer doing a poor job of the characters. Hard to relate to any of them. As it was, the story was just kind of lame and pathetic.

Come on, stop teasing. Need more stories of the needs of a hot fifty-something divorcee named Erin. Need chapter 2, etc. Got my juices going.