All Comments on 'Picking Strawberries'

That was fantastic. Loved the transformation and all the love and support. I need a Bobbi in my life ❣️❣️❣️

The best story I have read here!

Tears of joy!

Thank you!!!

❤️💋💋💋

Outstanding story, please keep it alive.

Love the positive encouragement you put in your stories. Thank you. ❤️❤️❤️

I loved the story, soft kisses and acceptance and so well written. I gave you 5 stars because it won't let me give you 10!

As always a great story and one I hope you will revisit. I like rereading you stories as your ending always make sense.

Love,Mimi

You are my inspiration. Thank you for another lovely tale of love and joy. hugs and kisses. Chloe x

Another of your positive stories I’ve come to read almost breathlessly in one go. They always end too quickly exactly when they need to. I’m hooked to the good feeling they leave me with each time.

Your schedule just seems to keep pace with the weather here in east Tennessee. Coffee, cat in lap and a warm Shelby story to enjoy while outside is grey and miserable. As always my dear, you do not disappoint. I deeply enjoyed how you delved into the emotional and spiritual connection two people can have. I find you touch me with your stories. Like a warm hug from a good friend. Picking strawberries, loved to do that as a kid. eat one put one in the basket, ;)

I have no idea why, but while reading this amazing tale, I could not help but think of Bobbi bouncing around in a plaid mini skirt and my little pony crop top while in the kitchen fixing a brisket sandwich and singing along to her Bobbi time playlist. I have probably taken one to many traumatic hits to the head...LOL

Another wonderful story from my favorite author. 5⭐️

I loved that the sex was just a natural outcome from their attraction. Sometimes the sex seems rushed or unnatural. Even if Steve and Bobbi had confusion, they both went for it and were rewarded with a powerful connection. And, Steve quickly came to terms regarding him being gay or bi or whatever. He crushed on Bobbi for years, and now gets Bobbi. A wonderful reward!

A beautiful love story no matter what your gender. Well done.

As always a very lovely srory. I definitely needs a part 2 :) Maybe add some drama in that. A 'best case scenario' stry like this is very nice to read, but a little drama makes it seem more real. Oh and you switched Steve mom's name from Eve to Beverly. I personally liked Eve more :) And one you wrote about Amber whan I think you ment Rachel. But overall a very pleasant read and i did shed a few tears :) Keep up the good work.

Loved that Steve was pan-sexual and not gay or a 'trainee chaser'. He fell for the person; not a boy or a girl but a person. On the other hand you need to work on your football knowledge! At 6'8" and 370 pounds, Tiny would not be a defensive end.At the NFL level, there are only a few offensive tackles that are even close to that size, and maybe a couple of D tackles close to that weight but probably not more than 6'3". That said it was still a cute story. I hope you follow up on their experiences in college.

Loved it

Outstanding and inspirational like all of your other works.

I know this is a piece of fiction, but it mirrors what is happening all over the country. People are coming to the terms of non-conforming genders all the time, and it is a very wonderful thing. With the assistance of loving family and friends, she was able to become the woman she has always meant to be at a young age. I just wish I could have done the same thing at her age. Better late than never! Ah! Story idea for you. A very mature trans woman finally becomes her true self later in life. Aches,pains, wrinkles and all. Inner beauty finally emerges

Wish I’d of had family and friends like that. What a wonderful introduction into Bobbi’s life, quite simply a lovely story, keep them coming.💕

You always write such happy, hopeful stories, and I always cry about them! Thank you for sharing your talent. You are an excellent story teller.

Now, an observation: Steve's mom is Eve early in the story and Beverly toward the end. Was this intentional, or did you just do what I do and forget to read through after having Word change a name? *chuckle*

Excellent story that deserves continuing 😍

You wrote a very romantic and erotic story; the support for Bobbi was cool.

Absolutely stunning, i don't know how you do it again and again, I'm just so thankful for every single sentence ❤️ xx

Great story, loved every sentence. I just wish your stories were tagged, so readers could find them better and know what's in store to a degree. That said...5*

I love this story! And not just because I chose my name in a similar way. I think the love and support shown to Bobbie is amazing, whilst not glossing over the attitudes of some of her former teammates and the general anxiety we are all familiar with when first going out as our true selves.

You've done it again, another gem of romantic fantasy. A gentle tale of love, acceptance and self realisation, I particularly liked the way nothing traumatic happened in this one. Some of your stories contain incidents that can be quite triggering for me, leaving me shaking and disturbed. There is of course a time and place for such tales and variety is the spice of life, but I really appreciated the warm and supportive atmosphere of this story, as relaxing and comforting as a scented bath at the end of the day. Worth every one of those five stars.

Beautifully written story, I hope that you continue and we get to share in their ultimate happiness when it finally happens

Do you have any idea how difficult it is to read while I'm crying?! Only happy years, I promise. I hope there's an update on Bobbi and Steve coming someday. Thank you so much for this. 🥰

I gave it a 5. Excellent story and very well written. It was nice to not have a very unpleasant situation. It was pleasant and happy from start to finish. Thank you for the entertaining read.