by EmilyMiller
You do this so well. I do think you left some room for a few more chapters between this and Suck, Plug, Spank, though. I can hope can't I?
@ShelbyDawn57 - I was kinda thinking that there could be one more meeting in between, yes š Emily
Nice job, Emily. I really felt for her and was glad the J&SB were willing to take it slow to help build her confidence.
@SouthernCrossfire - the story is about what goes on in the heads of at least a significant number of women and at least one way (maybe non-traditional) to get past the voices that tell you āyouāre not good enough.ā I realize that men have these voices too, maybe saying slightly different things. While the story is not autobiographical in detail or plot, Iāve certainly derived personal validation via liberating sexual experiences. One reason I believe that any form of legal / consensual sex is such a force for good. Emily
I can't take the self-deprication! I'm glad she found a couple of cool bros to therapeutically fuck some confidence into her :)
One of those stories that gives you conflicting feelings. But that's what a good story does. It doesn't spell out what you're "supposed" to feel about her actions. It let's the reader decide.
Written with your usual mix of kink and heart.
Wowww, that's good stuff Ms Miller š
There's something incredibly hot about how confident and patient and supportive Jay and Bob are, surprisingly wholesome for how dirty the situation is š³
Also "the loxodont in the lodging," š
@PennyThompson - thank you, Iām kinda fond of that silly line too š Emily
yes, please. Sometimes I find your writing a bit off my tastes, but this was just the right amount and mix of shame, lust and caring!
@haltwhogoesthere - I write a very wide range of stuff from sweet romance to extreme kink (sometimes both in the same story) - categories, tags, and advisories are your friends š Emily
Hey, EM. Good, fun stuff. But I gotta tell ya', I'm an old man and I've enjoyed reading erotica and watching porn for close to fifty years. I've enjoyed most of it and look forward to enjoying more. However, in all that time, consuming all that material, I've never come across "Jay and Silent Bob" before. That's a true first. You're just way too much. Great story. Well done.
@ccitydude - thank you. I have to include some random Askewniverse ref in part three š Emily
One thing I appreciate about your stories is the emotional insight and realism. I always seem to walk away with more insight into human emotions/sexuality. This story included.
The main characterās self-deprecation pained me, as it was meant to. That a petite, cute, brilliant girl in her 20s is also wracked with such insecurities is a reminder of our common humanity. I look forward to her sexual journey of empowerment. As always, thereās so much more to say but I donāt want to ramble. Well done once again!
@Eosphorus - thank you! I think Iāve always had some elements of emotion in the majority of my work, right from the beginning. But Iāve learned to lean into it more. Iāve learned - as I have in my personal life - that while sex for the sake of sex is lovely, sex linked to deep emotions - positive or negative - is so much more. Yet again, Iām sounding like a trad wife š¬ Emily
As always, I love the little witticisms, like the loxodont. I had to look that one up, as video games are not part of my experience, but I like that the references are a catholic mix. Erudite erotica.
I really appreciate the mix of heat, humor, and genuine emotion that's blended in this story. Thank you!
Always enjoy your pieces and this one is no exception. You know just how to turn a kink into a great story with your special wording.