All Comments on 'Rebecca Ch. 01'

Really enjoyed this. Very good. You set up the concept of total change, including personality change, re Sonja's apparent reluctance and doubts over whether Rebecca truly wanted her fantasy made reality. I liked this. What I felt it missed was some kind of polite interaction from Jessica when she confronts Rebecca as her Domme self. She and Sonja just went immediately into very cruel Domme mode, which seemed unrealistic and spoilt it a bit for me. I would have liked something along the lines of Jessica, perhaps still in vanilla mode, toying with Rebecca before revealing the strict Domme side. I would also like to hear something of the interaction between Sonja and Jessica when Sonja first explained Rebecca's fantasies to her a year earlier. Anyhow, well done. Looking forward to the next 2 parts.

OMG, that is an awesome story. cant wait to read the others when written

I reread it again. I particularly enjoyed this bit - 'She took her bag and said: "I will leave you now. If you need any help, you can count on me, Jessica." Then she turned to me and said: "If you have something to say, say it now, bitch!"' - as it superbly was Sonja letting Jessica know know that this was her last and only chance to talk to Sonja as a friend. That their roles had already completely changed from one of friendship to now Sonja being a Domme who looks upon her former friend as a mere slave. I hope we have more of this in the next chapter when you describe this story from Sonja's POV. I like these mental / psychological aspects of friendships changing fundamentally between two people when they embark on a journey of one being a Domme to another.

Loved this story, looking forward to reading what next happens to slave Rebecca

where is part 2?

Oops. in my last post I meant '...as it superbly was Sonja letting Rebecca know know that this was her last and only chance to talk to Sonja as a friend'.

Enjoyed most of this story. I would like to have seen some friendship exercise before they went into a strong D/s relationship. You did not add findom on your tags as if you did i would not have read it, i feel those use that as a crutch because they aren't sure what else to do. Don't make it about money and you may have a winner here.

It's an interesting and my kind of theme. Cannot rate the story properly yet.

An exclent begining I look forward to the rest of her training and life as a slave.

Promising start … hope for many more. Halters with surprising twists and turns