All Comments on 'Safe in the Lion's Den Pt. 07'

Isn't that a bit of a dick move in the middle of a top secret mission?

@ag2507 Not really. His face is already all over the news. It's keeping Portia and Sophia out of it that's important; at least for now. A lot of what seems meaningless now, will fall into play down the road. EG: moving around obstacles in the dark not just once, but twice. I suspect a few of my regular readers know where this is heading.

Heap big Sigma male still doing an absolutely stirling job of staying under the radar... How many breadcrumbs with how many government agencies is it up to now?

Been drinking again, Anonymous? By the way, Stirling is the heat/cold powered engine. Sterling is the spelling for worthiness. Your insults might have a better effect if your grammar wasn't less than stellar.

Enjoying the story. Agree that being so public while on a “top secret” mission is a little out of rational thought.

Biggest wish is that each chapter was longer then two pages.

@ polite Anonymous: Yes, that is a complaint I've had for a while. There are two reasons that I tend to keep them between 5-8 pp in a Word doc. #1, there are a lot of people who will get bored easily and move on if it's too long. #2, my schedule and writing impetus don't always mesh up, so instead of waiting longer, I'll tend to crop the story at a cliffhanger statement.

As for being so public while on a mission, this is fiction, LOL! While I do try to be accurate on most stuff, I need to add some drama to the story, otherwise he'd have driven straight home and gone to bed. So as an example, Jack is enrolling Sophia in school. Obviously in real life, she would be home schooled, but it adds to the depth of the story to allow her to make friends her own age. So, it's not rational; it's entertainment, LOL.