All Comments on 'Secret Smiles and Three Little Words Pt. 02'

Loved it. Your writing is so beautiful.

All wonderful except for the first paragraph. My respect for him dropped significantly after his safeword speech. That is a personal choice but the fact remains there are always risks, always unknowns, always changes and always room for error.

Got dressed and left. Because she didn't trust him. No way no how. Nothing in the writing convinced me that she would agree to anything he suggested and be anything but unhappy. Bad story.

OK, as the writer of this story I love the feedback so thank you for taking the time to post it! But I need to address the last comment. Let me make one thing perfectly clear, Alex chose to explore this lifestyle, Gavin gave her the safe words. Alex is totally protected by her Dom during this session and in the future. As it is with the lifestyle, the sub is always the foremost in the mind of the Dom. Their safety and pleasure is paramount. It supercedes the desire of the Dom even. I'm not sure where you came up with that she was unhappy at any point. Gavin is her protector, the lifestyle demands safety at all times. I hope I make that clear as we go, I will go through the future posts again to ensure I do that. Again thank you for posting and voting I really do appreciate it!

Disagree that she would leave. I too didn't like the safeword speech, it seems like an ego-trip to say the safeword shouldn't be used further down the line, but the rest of the story was hot. Keep it up!

..about Alexandria no longer thnking of herself as Alex.

have read both chap 1 & 2 tonight...wowza. This is one of the most erotic stories I've read on here...and I've read so many, and many terrific ones, this is definitely one of my very favorites so far. If only Gavin was real and could be cloned lol!

What a wonderful explanation of a loving Dom caring for his sub. Even in his punishment of Beth one could see that he cared. You are a really good writer.

It's difficult to find here stories that highlight not just the physical pleasure but also the deep sated sense of peacefulness that comes within surrendering your will to someone else. The thrill of the unknown for the next session is also an integral part of the relationship and what it keeps it moving forward without becoming boring or predictable. Thanks for catching so many different shades in such complex relationships

I read both part 1 and 2 tonight. I'm going to save the rest, and read a little bit at a time. I don't think I can handle more excitement this evening.

So eager

Great story. I am curious however. Are you referring to a specific product that he uses on her? What is it if that's the case?

Great story. Sort of storage strange place to cut off this chapter.

Have read a lot of erotica. BDSM is by far my favorite. This was a beautiful story showing the softer kinder side of erotic BDSM. I very much enjoyed it and was highly aroused. Thank you and I look forward to reading the rest

I’m hooked.

Hottttttt 🥵

The past tense of DRAG is DRAGGED, dammit, not DRUG!