All Comments on 'Serving Lelia'

Nice and short and sweet, great start! Love to hear what happens when the friend comes over!

I agree with mrwidehorizons, nice start, looking forward to more.

Good start.

Good start, albeit with very little background or backstory; but I'm looking forward to see how this develops

Sweet. Keep it up.

Because after a hard day of work, who doesn’t want to be a goddamn servant all night. It’s bad enough you have to eat shit and smile at work all day, you come home and you have to eat shit and smile all night too?

Wow. How exciting. And then to spend hours estingvoussy. Gosh, how exciting. No reading books, no doom scrolling, playing video games or even decompressing after work. No. You cook, clean, and get shit on by your spouse who does nothing but insult you.

The only thing this asshole deserves is a nice long stay in a mental hospital. Maybe some shock therapy will wake his dumb ass up.,

Good start, its fetish story ignore the negative comments. May be the boots licking and chastity should not be mentioned more since there are millions of stories focussing on these but of course its yours to decide. Humiliating him for his submissiveness and size of his penis and bringing Elise into the action would be great. They can measure him together remove his pubic hair, force him eat their pussies, even expose him in public would be nice touches.

Wonderful start, could be a really fun series

I liked it and look forward for the next installment.