All Comments on 'Shut Up and Suck! Ch. 01'

Very nice beginning with great descriptions. I could almost see Riley's cock in Danny's mouth with that hilarious but adorable "Yesh...Wiwee" line. Looking forward to finding out what happens to Danny next in chapter #2.

Gonna have to rub one out after reading this. Can't wait for chapter 2.

The one thing I don't understand about a lot of stories with a "straight" guy, Is them wanting to see the cocksucker naked. If you are so straight, why do you want them naked.

Excellent start to a promising, erotic and arousing story. Your imagery was spot on helping this reader visualize and almost feel that thick cock in my throat wanting so much to be Danny! Please don't keep the readers waiting too long for the next chapters!

Danny definitely a trooper so willingly taking whatever these guys put in his mouth. Those of us who totally need to be on our knees can understand..And so envious..feeling so beta now but also hard.. Great story..

JT

Real nice. This author consistently goes off the tether with his erotic vision of men. I would like to find young Riley, naked and cuffed in a cheap motel room on some lonesome southern highway, and use his hot suck boy pussie mouth for anon servicing to 'cumpletion'. Gentle and rough. Affectionate and cruel. Power surrendered and taken. Anon scenes and hook-ups have their own kind of fleeting and urgent intimacy; a frank sharing of needs, a pure democracy of male lust. Primal and un-articulated. Owning and using a hot suck boy speaks to my erotic experience with men, all the way back to high school. There is just enough context and venue here to frame the sex scenes. Well done. WG

Mmm, two sets of hairy musky cum loaded balls to suck and lick...would love to be able to smell, lick and taste their masculine crotches...love your cock sucking stories, they never fail to make me want to follow your lead and have a good safe married friend "put me on my knees".

A little rough for me... the piss drinking was over the top

Reading this made me want to be the cocksucker. Being sub, I would love to have two studs abuse my mouth and throat, and who knows what else? I can hardly wait for the next session, to find out if they use just his mouth, or explore other avenues.....

Excellent so far. The sent of a man's restroom...oh my!

Yeah, I've never made the connection between urine and semen. Absolute turn on draining a straight guys balls, not so being peed on...

All of what happened to him could have been done through an appropriate sized opening in a heavy leather or latex hood, keeping him short enough of air, to add to the humiliation of swallowing whatever 'came' his way...I speak from a lifetime of personal experience, usually trapped in a rubber-lined canvas bondage-bag, being 'wanked to death' while swallowing whatever 'cums' MY way...