All Comments on 'Swinging in the 70s Ch. 07'

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Peter_ClevelandPeter_Cleveland12 months ago

It's good, at last, to hear Monica's reactions to this new lifestyle of "swinging." Imagining a woman's mind and consciousness is a challenge to all male writers, and TheGraduate88 has pulled it off at least as well as most of us. In places, Monica's monologue does sound more like written prose than like unrehearsed speech. For my personal tastes, the story of David's courtship of Monica is too close to a fairy-tale romance, and Monica's admiration of her husband is too boundless. Among the chapter's strong points is the long and erotic sex scene with Monica and Tony.

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1948 Natal Year. 1968 Draftee. 1976 B.S. 1978 M.A. Four decades as a professional planner. Free thinker, part of the sexual revolution, enjoyer of women, strictly heterosexual.

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