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DeLaFayeabout 2 years agoAuthorWhitewaterbum, (love that username!) Thank you! I was worried it was a bit tame for this audience. It's nice to know it's appreciated!
oneagainstabout 2 years agoAwesome. Covered a lot of ground in 750 words, which is an art in itself. Keep it up!
ElectricBlueabout 2 years agoI loved the way you repeated "I should leave", counting the beats of the story. A good use of the 750 word format, and I always like a story that evokes art!
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