All Comments on 'Teacher's Challenge'

Outstanding plot and lovely writing!

Absolutely a phenomenal story. Extremely well written.

Yeah, that was amazing. Great story.

Absolutely one of my favorite stories. I hope we will read more of Erica's adventures! This story deserves 10 stars!

Amazing. ..just amazing! Girl, how do you do it? You have a wonderful voice and an awesome imagination. I look forward to every new story that you write.

That was quite a lovely story, one of the best i have read here. I certainly look forward to reading many more of yours!

Absolutely wonderful!!!

I truly loved this one

Amazing story and character growth!. Loved the ending as well!

Wonderful story!

5

very well written totally loved it

I truly loved this story...although I'm not sure which I liked more. The story or the sex. The ending was incredible I almost teared up. 💖💖💖

WOW what a great fromerica Ericastory. Well written. Would to hear more

I really liked most of your story. A little concerned about Erica’s promiscuity & unprotected sex. But over all an excellent read, keep writing! A picture of you would be nice, curious to see what you look like.

Wonderful story.

I would have loved this to be me.

Good story well thought out and written

loved it keep writing you're good at it.

leah

I absolutely loved this story. Very well written. Very erotic. I loved reading about all of the outfits that Erica wore.

An absolutely fabulous and well written story that touched my heart and gave me hope that I too had made the right decision.

Incredible! Orgasmed once... came back a couple of hours later and had another orgasm. Superb writing!

Thank you a very fun well written story. 5 stars!

Love your stories and loved this one!

This is literally the best story I've ever read on Literotica. Great combination of steamy sex, believable situation-setting, understanding/empathy with the proponent, all with a very high standard of writing. Absolutely brilliant.

WOW !

That was a heck of a journey.

Eric discovering Erica was really exciting to me as I made a similar life changing transition many years ago.

Though mine had no surgical changes.

Your ability to draw this reader into the story was so enjoyable.

I so wanted to smash Dean Wagner's penis and nuts between to bricks for his abuse of power.

Covering the follow up of the charicters at the end really closed out the story well

Great writing !

Thank You

You have done it again! Another great story. I truly enjoy your stories and this one is no different. As always another 5 star story.

Absolutely wonderful as always. I enjoyed her sluttiness and lack of protection. Your writing style is a beautiful mix of reality and perfect world where the good always wins and thrives.

Lovely idea that an old prestigious school usually filled with ultra conservatives is an all inclusive accepting place. We need more thinkers who see outside of their little bubble.

Please keep up the good work and I look forward to the next story.

Loved it.

Amazing. Love it!

Oh my God! I didn't come here to cry so hard! Thank you for writing this! I wish I could have gone to their wedding! 🥰

What started as an interesting story changed into an emotional rollercoaster. I cried for the last two pages straight 😂. Thank you for writing such great content! You are very appreciated

I am always in awe of how you, ShelbyDawn57, lay out all of these threads of a life, in a story about that life, and then weave them into a beautiful tapestry. Always a beautiful balance of ‘Lit’ and ‘erotica’. I know I’m gonna get hot under the collar (and the belt), I know I’m gonna cry (at least once), and I know I’m going to walk away with a greater understanding of a life I don’t lead, a path I’ll never walk. Thank you!

I absolutely loved this. Especially taking us years down the road in their lives. Amazing writing. Thank you for sharing.

Fantastic story. Bravo!! Loved the journey.

I agree with all of these positive comments. Well done. Very enjoyable.

Loved this story!!!! Don't know how it could be any better!!!

Loved the story looking forward to reading more of your stories

I cried and I laughed, got angry and melted. The is a wonderful story. Thank you so much for taking the time to put this down in a format that is sharable with others. THIS!

Superb story!! Keep up the wonderful writing. I love the way you eased his decision throughout the story.

Great Story! One of the best I've read here!

Absolutely wonderful. I loved the entire thing.

a truly marvelous hilarious and moving story. great read! please continue writing in this lovely style. it makes for happy readers

Very heartwarming story. Carol and Erica are lucky to have such understanding parents.

This one is truly amazing 🤩! This is now very near to the top of my favorites on this site, just behind "Secrets and Surrender" by Xarth which has been my favorite for several years. I continue to love your style and this story just absolutely checked all of my boxes. It certainly deserves the insanely high rating it has garnered. - Once Again, Tysvm 😘

Definitely one to add to my top favorites list. Such a beautiful story of self discovery with that extra special splash of eroticism we all hold so dear. Tysvm for taking the time to keep us entertained. ♡♡♡

Wonderful and humane story! Best I've read yet on this site!

This has to be the best story, I've reason here!

I never could figure, what was coming next.Even trying guess, I wasn't even close. TY, I enjoyed every word of it!!!!!!!

Great story! Love every aspect of it. If everyone in the world would only be half as understanding as the characters in your story, it would be a far better place!

Great, loved it!

Loved this one!

Mere hmm. Top skills at character development. You have a rare touch. Light but so well done.

Great, loved it! Много хубаво написано!

Loved it all. It was well written and had everything. It was erotic, sensitive, naughty and had my emotions in overdrive. I got horny at some parts, angry at others, and had tears of joy running down my face with Erica's boys serenading her. The ending was pretty much perfect. My name is Sarah Anne and I'm a Tgirl who is writing this and my make-up is a mess because of it. 10/10

This story touched me like I have never been touched before. Had my birth year been 1997 instead of 1957 this might have been my life. You would not believe my two careers but I’ve swung both ways as long as I can remember. Thanks for letting me live out my fantasy through this story. To Sarah Anne, the Tgirl, I’m so jealous of how you are able to live and what you’ve done. Michael/Michaela

Epic story, well written with enough erotica and the perfect amount of romance. Great ending thanks for the entertainment.

Simply amazing!!! The story, the writing... Well done doesn't cover it!!! ❤

Very well written, a compulsive read. I enjoyed it very much. Head and shoulders above most of the stories in this site.

Wow, great story! Definitely one of the best I have. Read on literotica! Loved the characters and definitely love the writer!

Oooh, I was looking for this, I am so glad I found it. Excellent story Shelby, loved reading it again...

Excellent storytelling! It really was quite tender and loving, with just a dash of sultry added in. I really do wonder how many times this has happened in real life. Once again, an outstanding piece!

As a general rule I rarely, if ever, comment on stories. But I have to say that I did not expect to spend my entire Sunday morning immersed in Erica’s story/transition, but I’m so happy I did. What a great read, thank you.

Congratulations Shelby, I Love this story, it is one of my favorites. Let's celebrate with some cocktails just me, you, and Erica, ha...

Congratulations Shelby, I Love this story, it is one of my favorites. Let's celebrate with some cocktails just me, you, and Erica, ha...

Who is a very clever person what a wonderful well written well told informative story

Fantastic read from start to finish

krissie xxx

Amazing. Great story and ending. 5 stars naturally

Congratulations on the Win! I've said it before, and I'll say it again: I love your writing! Thanks for sharing.

A wonderful story that gives a lot of emotion and emotion to everyone who reads it.

I can't find words to thank you Shelby Dawn57 and express my admiration for your poetic talent and the creation of this work.

Thank you SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 📝❤️🧒🏻💏👧🏻

Wspaniała historia, dająca bardzo wiele wzruszeń i emocji każdej osobie która ją czyta. Nie umiem znaleźć słów aby Ci Shelby Dawn57 podziękować i wyrazić swój podziw dla Twojego talentu poetyckiego i stworzenie tego dzieła.

Dziękuję SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska. 📝❤️🧒🏻💏👧🏻

Wow ShelbyDawn, just well, WOW !

After long thought, I think there are possibilities to extend this story to include other key characters, new senarios and further exploration on a grander scale. The door is certainly open if a story fits the nature of the beginning until the present and thereafter.

AMAZING!

That was a fun story to read. It was well written and kept flowing along nicely. Thanks for sharing it.

Extremely well done with a fine touch describing your characters. What and where else do you write?

Loved it gripped me and kept me going . Well written

Superb. Thanks so much for this story. Amazing. Hard me hard throughout!

I particularly love the fact that Eric was all in on being Erica - a sweet change from the forced feminization that seems to be the preferred story line.

I loved the story. In the beginning when He/She was coerced into sex, I thought here we go again, another T-girl being basically forced to do things against his will.

Turned out to be a journey and transition. Loving and well written.

I am in love with a ladyboy in Thailand.

Going to have to make a major change in my life to make this work.

Hope it turns out as well as this story.

I don't know if she will agree to the full transition..one can only hope. I will love her the same whatever her decision.

Wow, just wow! I love the positive framing of the characters (including Erica's) perspectives, primarily how everyone was so accepting of this radical shift. Great work!!

As usual with your tales, I was captivated from early on. My critiques: Erica takes on the sex object role maybe a bit too readily to seem plausible, and likewise the ex wife's omnipresence and acceptance/ support is also hard to believe.

Your writing is so good, though... my gripes are minute and insignificant compared to your stories as a whole.

What a hot and telling story! I loved that a younger Alan had taken his virginity. What a stud who knew how to use his assets to turn his teacher! Amazing! THANKS for a fantastic read!

I liked this story a lot. I loved Ericas journey of discovering herself. As a transwoman I like to read trans related stories and having an upbeat and beautiful one is just really nice. Her first time having sex with her student was a real good scene. Letting loose all that pent up desire felt really good. The poker night felt a bit off for me since I was afraid that the plot would turn into another direction after it, but it luckily turned out fine in the end. Thank you a lot for writing!

Absolutely brilliant.

Beautiful romantic story

I think this was the first story of yours that I ever read. I love Erica and Ben so much. I'll be back to experience Erica's transformation again and again. 🥰

Random encounter to read this lovely story. I started cd when I was in 8th grade. Red hair, very feminine face great wheels and ass. Mom’s clothes. My football coach asked me to stay late and told me I was pretty and I didn’t know up from down except I went up to him and laid my face against his chest and cried. He held me and kissed me and gave me three hand jobs my first kiss and sex in same day! That set me for life as a very submissive slut. I am bi and have grown kids but I hook up a lot. No shame just cock drunk.

As someone already wrote - absolutely brilliant!

Good story but the teacher student barrier or lack of on page 3 ruined it for me.

Excellent!! If only the world was truly so accepting and forgiving. A great story!! Good luck with the contest!!

A beautifully written story of sexually charged romance! I loved every chapter of it and the conclusion was sweet and enduring!

I usually like the one page naughty stories and have never been into one to read past 2 or 3 pages, but holy shit!!! Not only is that my favorite one I've ever read, but every single page was amazing!!!! Alan isn't the only talented writer......whomever wrote this is genius I've never written more than 5 or 10 words in the comments section until now---thank you for giving me that beautiful yet orgasmic, lust filled, for sluts story!!!!! My favorite by far. Keep that shit up please!!

My Darling Shelby you must stop writing such wonderful prose. I never tire of your inventiveness. Well constructed tales with an underlying moral and poignant too happy ending. The careful way you take Eric on his journey to Erica has a wonderful feeling of kismet. Thank you for providing a more captivating read than some other less endearing authors. However I suppose it takes allsorts to pen a line or make a world. Even William Shakespeare was prone to hyperbole. Thank you - Wes in Scotland

Rather like Captain Corelli’s Mandolin in many ways. A generational story, but with great sex.

Omg.. love this story.

Stellar writing, I will be reading more of your works. Thanks

One of the best i have read, do keep writing please & Thank you

GREAT writing. Thx!

OMG a mix of slutty sex and love. Amazing!

I can honestly say that is the most engrossing and well well thought out story i have read so far. Attention to detail was superlative to say the least. Thank you for writing it for us to enjoy.

This was such a great story, I loved how he became she-waking up to herself. Thanks for writing this.

A nother master peace.

All of your stories are amazing. You are a great word-smith. I'm truly impressed!

Absolutely the most beautiful story I have read. I would love to be Erica. Your writing flows from your fingertips and helped me be in the story. It was vivid in great detail. ❤️

Brilliant loved it, well written, felt like I was sat watching it all unfold before my eyes

Fantastic as always, was surprised to see Erica had her cock removed for a vagina.