by silkstockingslover
Is there any chance you can flip the script and have a black woman and white man? And with no other guys in it? Because while I like IR, I like to see it the other way around and its been a while since you done it that way.
Still good work through, just a request.
Well i guess that you most likely will get complaints about this, but none of those will come from me. This was, fun, entertaining and enjoyable. I especially liked it when you introduced Karen's daughter into the story.
Terrible, nothing but one cliche after another. Why not a Muslim woman or a Hindu? No build up or tension, she's griping about music, she is instantly a total whore. Beyond idiotic. You were utterly lazy when writing this story.
I feel like the more interesting story to read about would've been the daughters experience
I am a fan of yours and generally enjoy reading your stories. The build ups, the initial resistance and then submission by the white girl to black cock but this story was bland and very basic in my humble opinion.
As usual your stories are always pushing my buttons, wish you could have another page.....to see how the future unfolded for Karen. I know i can imagine but it is more fun to read it. Still, great work as usual, thanks.
You sure are a self hating racist, are you not? Still I saw the comments on some of your latest stories inquiring about your health. So I am glad you are back and hopefully you are healthy. That good health wish is about you personally though. Can not say the same for the story.
😁
Yes Creeperclaw its wierd you want to hear about fucking an 80 year old nun or otherwise. Unless its Sofia Loren. Then its defiantly not wierd.
hello
great to read a new story after your forced stop.
you can be better and told daugther story and pastor wife
five stars to say go and write more thanks
Fun, dirty and nasty. Just what I wanted. This needs to be a series.
The fact that page 3 was only the words THE END was a lol moment for me.
5 stars.
Another wonderfully filthy tale from your deliciously dirty imagination, Jasmine. There has to be a follow up, surely? Karen could be taught to clean her daughter up, and vice versa. I think you could manage an incest based story! 5 stars for this one, whatever you decide.
I see some people here are alluding to your some issues you've had, which I only bring up to say I truly wish you the best. Along those lines, perhaps it's time to step away with grace, so as to not further tarnish your legacy.
It reminded me of a 1970's porn movie, it only lacked the cheesy soundtrack.
The most basic of set ups followed by a disturbing sex scene that leaves you physically cold and mentally violated.
Maybe try for style and substance rather than trying to upload something every couple of weeks?
Love how you jumped right in and worked the backstory in as you went along, very nice. Also loved the reference to her cigarette need in HS. While I know it's not your thing, the smoking fetish is huge for me. Thanks for another great work. 5 stars again.
Could have done a little bit more to develop the plot. This is less a story and more just a scene from a porno that has been written out. Not bad for what it is, but not good as an expression of literature.
"..in a tone that implied he could care less."
I'm certain that, given the concern for education that runs through your stories, you'll want to correct that to "..he could not care less."
When do the white families whom lost their fathers, granddad, uncles, and brothers fighting and beating the south, what about their reparations, thousands of whites who fought and died only to have their families hated and discriminated against painted as racists and bigots by those very people their ancestors freed?
Great to read about white bitched getting blacked - I had done a few. 5 Stars and favorite.