All Comments on 'The Office Party'

Boring and poorly written story; and what the hell is with all the semi colons? You have no idea how and when; to use that rarely needed form of punctuation. Please; stop writing.

Glad you liked it.

Clearly, you need a dictionary and some punctuation help. But ignore the troll who advises you stop writing.

On the contrary, please keep writing. Improve through exercise. More character development, more dependent clauses that actually depend on something.

But, yes, a sweet story.

Don't take any notice of the anonymous, faceless wonders, if they are so perfect why hide??

Keep writing bud, I'm enjoying your tales. Refreshingly realistic.