All Comments on 'The Wiccaed Ring'

Somewhat different from your usual stories in some ways, but also familiar and as usual, very well written.

Love your stories. Already looking forward to the next one.

Thank you.

Loved the story, and it kept me reading straight through until the finish. One loose end: Katherine seemed to think the ring would corrupt the wearer in time. Maybe voluntarily forgiving and releasing people broke that aspect of the curse? Anyway, would have been interesting to see how that got resolved.

Another great one. Thank

This was a wonderful read. Nice twists and a fun ending. Thank you.

As always an enjoyable read. Thank you!

Got to page 5, then stopped. You deserve to be paid, so I have bought the book on Amazon and I urge other readers to do the same.

No, I am not related to the author!

I always enjoy your writing style, whenever I see one of your stories posted I accept that I won't be doing anything else until I have completely finished the story! This was no exception.

5/5

I’m a fan of all of your work. This might just be your best one yet. I have absolutely no criticisms to express. I understand why you left his situation poly, but I have a personal preference for Dawn. Large breasts aside, I find her intelligence, openness, and compassion very attractive. That’s probably a projection of what I long for in my life. Thank you for the excellent story.

I also meant to add that this story is a very welcome departure from your usual material.

Great story. There is a potential for future stories of James and the coven. 5 stars!

I also gave this one 5 stars, as I thought it was a very well-written and enjoyable read.

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Not much more to be said other than...

...very nicely done.

You've spun an amazing tale here. thank you.

Another fun one by one of the best authors on Literotica. This one could stand by itself, but there's also room for more stories and adventures in this setting.

I did have a couple of nitpicks, but they're relatively minor: James was a bit of a selfish lover in the beginning. Took him way too long in the story to start to reciprocate and eating his partners out. Your characters are usually much more balanced in that regard, so it stood out. I can understand it from James' lack of experience, but still 😁

There's a few typos here and there throughout the story, but 3 stood out. On Literotica page 23 of the story, you wrote "Andrew" (Tate) a couple of times when you meant Kevin (Tate). And you misspelled Koenig as Keonig on that same page.

Understand that I know they're nitpicks and I'm only pointing them out because the rest of the story is so engaging and a good read.

I saw someone else mention that you've got some books out on Amazon. I need to check those out and buy some of my favourites.

I am in awe of your imagination, such a clever creative storey. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Another great story from one of the best writers on this site.

Too long and boring. The first 2 pages were so slow, so boring.

I love reading all of your stories

Another winner, sir. Thank you.

The day you post a story I do not think is five star material is the day I leave this site. Congratulations on another amazing story!

Is the ring still in place? It was not covered off.

Lovely and beautiful story like all I've read of yours. Great focus of individual people, their perspectives and goals etc.

And a touch of magic doesn't hurt.

Thanks for sharing with the world!

Great story. But when Kevin gets to Jennifer’s and is black bagged he’s referred to as Andrew for the entirety of the situation. Unless there was an additional person?

Great to see you back in business!! Another fantastic story. Thank you very much!

Very well done sir!!

Excellent story. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Yet another beautiful story from you, I really enjoyed reading it, thank you for sharing this with us.

Excellent!

Thank You!

Brilliant!

One question though, who the neck is Andrew?

So good to have another story from you. Thank you. I loved it. :-)

Simply superb, an excellent addition to a growing repertoire of beautiful stories. A million thanks for sharing.

Another amazing story - love your story telling - your imagination is something else and we are grateful you choose to share with us.

thank you for a lovely time spend

Nice story!

I have to say I felt less engaged with the main character compared to your other works, especially Jack Danner, Satyr Play, Shepherd stories and many of your other works.

That may be because the focus was more on the women. I liked their diversity and the fact that not all had sex with him. That ,as well done.

And yet, for once, I was not able to feel love, only attraction.

Still, a lot better than many many other stories on this site.

Thank you for sharing and overcoming your own hurdles for (with?) us.

One thing...maybe I missed it...did he ever get the ring off?"

I'm a fan of Jack, brilliant yarns all of them. This story I had to force myself to keep reading to the end. Lots of repetitive sex and very little plot/storyline that wasn't telegraphed from last month. Better than many on this site but I don't feel it was up to your usual creativity. Sorry.

after half a page of political man-splaining on page 1, I didn't bother with the next 24.

An awesome tale. Another legendary story.

The Literotica layout didn't help this story, a lot of unnecessary white lines that stopped the flow of the story. Besides it was noticeable that you wrote the story in stages, fi in the camping story you seem to start anew and some of the sex scenes need editing. Still you are a good enough writer to deliver an enjoyable and smooth story. Nice to see a throwback of the Century Traveler. 5*

Another brilliant story! Thanks BRS

Wonderful story!

This was quite the story! So entertaining. Thanks for sharing your wonderful creation!

This is a classic BurntRedstone tale, though your hero is much more put together than some of your prior heros! I think you've created the frame for another set of branching stories. I recall you'd said you had several ideas percolating - I suspect we're all looking forward to that cup of coffee when it brews!

Thanks for writing, BR.

Very sweet story!

Thank you for allowing us to experience it.

katzkin

Very good. However, in the US at least, most drugs are protected primarily by PATENT protection. So:

"Protecting the company's future profits by maintaining patents on lifesaving medicine for rare diseases is good business."

Chocolate Khaleesi

Lol, to the andrew tate being a villian! I don't know if it was intentional or not. No feelings invested, just ironic and humorous for me.

I saw someone else nod to Century Travelor. I'm so geeked out by that comment I looooooovvveee that story. It has its place in my heart.

As usual, thanks for the diversity with amazing depth. I think instead of hounding in the comments for my sequels.

I'm going to hound that ass to be a beta reader. If that's a thing. Seems like a win of getting my fix earlier, lol. Mr. I write for no one's deadline, bahaha. Honestly I was pleasantly surprised to get something so early.

Dude you also slipped up talking about meds are helping. That's concerning. New meds as in there were old meds, as in it's ongoing? It's weird to be concerned for someone I've never met. It's like, the stories meld together with echoes of a personality and loved ones personalities. Where one becomes attached to the creator and common themes and echoes of personalities throughout a body of work. Anne Rice recently passed. That was heartbreaking. So truly hope your healing and on the mend. Because your ass is incognito so idk how to stalk you and see if you are okay and just taking a break like my other authors I'm attached to.

Hate ending things heavy though so funny story. Well to me anyway. So Anne Rice had the sleeping beauty trilogy, under Anne roqulare. Something last name to distance the vampire lestat series, from flagrant erotica she had.

Anyway, I think I was like 11. And reading my way through the library to my proud african moms joy. I thought I picked up a remake of sleeping beauty. I stumbled onto word porn. And everyone thought I was being so studious staying up until 3am! It was bdsm, sub, dom, and whew better than any playboy magazine anyone ever tried to slip me. My brain was my playground. Omg I get gitty thinking about how bold my little ass was. I'd pop open those books anywhere, bc if I was fooled reading the first few pages I could bluff any adult into reading the first few pages and snatching my book back. Yes I was calculating at that age. Reread that trilogy, btw. Probably every 5 years or so, since then. Actually bout that time.

Wtf was the point of saying that, lol. I forgot. If you never read it though Anne Rice, sleeping beauty trilogy. Oh! My point was humor ending on a light note. Yea so that's like my connection to someone I never met but enjoy that memory fondly.

Yours, is probably my crazy ass rants when I'm giddy after binging a new drop. Like I'm high on the story just enjoyed. Yep, that is it. I caught a readers high, where I'm just so satisfied with my own internal dialog I just vomit on here and it feels so good. But if I don't get to vomit immediately I lose that high and have no comment. It's the old souls in the beefcakes and the dom/sub play. And you know there are so many little gifts that keep on giving that by the time I'm done reading I'm high. Lmao I have to look up if that's a thing a readers high, with zero stimuli but reading the good shit.

Plus! Cough cough. Why I can't wait for a century travelor sequel. Vampires! So hurry up and add me to the beta reader list after I figure how to get a response in feedback, and create a profile, and all the steps between

I also don't think you can fake the pure vomit of my true random thoughts under the name I call myself bc there is consistency. So hope nobody steals my lil handle it's so clever, and.... I'm proud of it. So yea, dude coming for the beta reader list. Get ready.

And if your a douche in real life. But a great writer. Well dammit that sux. Still hope your healing and despite everything of life just life-ing you find peace and joy in the moments most precious. Still reading your crack you put out, cuz I need to have my fix. But dammit in all caps, ĺol. Enjoy yourself, thanks for making me this giddy. It's addicting reading you.

As always your stories are incredible. Thanks for sharing.

Truly excellent. I join others in acknowledging your effort and artistry. Thank you.

Absolutely !! Great read!!

Wow...!!!!! What a fantastic story.

Corporate greed is a huge problem than causes problems for many people especially the poorest and less fortunate in America.

Looking forward to your next one..

OH MY...This has been THE best few days. Another great story from the Master. Thank You so much for your hard work. Truly another masterpiece.

Absolutely excellent. Very satisfying. I have read absolutely everything BurntRedstone has written. If this is the first of his stories that have read and enjoyed, you will be richly rewarded by reading more of his works.

Another great story.

What a great story. As soon as we meet James we know about hope. In a nasty world, there are som3 very good people.

5 stars. Excellent story.

Awesome story!!

An excellent and entertaining story. A bit to many sex scenes for me. My tastes could have used a bit more action also. But the lack of or excess of anything does not detract from my 5 star rating. To have such power to do good things. It makes you wonder would that power corrupt the person it was given to or did that power give the person more understanding and empathy.

Yup!! Another great story. As aways. Always look forward to seeing you share another story with us. Well done!

Another TERRIFIC tale from BurntRedstone. Well written and compelling as well as being plain down right fun. Well done. I truly enjoy your writing style and my favorite stories are the Jack Danner ones. I have read and re-read them all multiple times. Keep up the good work sir and I hope you live a long life and continue to write these amazing stories.

Thanks for getting back in the saddle. As a PSTD "graduate" I know that this takes both gumption and vision

5/5 Amazing as always. I wish Jennifer and James had gotten together at the end though.

You did it again!!! Writing excellent tales is your favorite pastime and this one fit perfectly in the other magical other worldly tales ….. just a little magic love and patience and yes wisdom from the grandparents plus universe and voila a entertaining story is out ….. thank you 🙏

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As usual a very thought out well written tale. Vreay job it was enjoyed n appreciated.

.... a story of love and magic, .... wonderful, .... ;-) ttfn

you are such s fine wordsmith !

A fine effort, warm and nice, with just enough intrigue. A little telegraphed on the setup, but setting up the future harem is like a sub-sub-genre anyway. Also throws the net wide enough to get almost all the girl-type fetishes; I'm not into piercings, but Dawn was fun.

My only quibble is I don't know if the backhand is a stereotype.

To clarify, it was really good, 5 stars, I intended 1 backhand mention, not 2.

Another excellent story. I did notice that Kevin (Tate) became Andrew for the initial part of his second visit to Jennifer's house. Still getting a 5 from me.

So good! Super hot sex scenes and a really likeable group of characters. Thank-you!!

It was good to read a story with such positive energy. It is good to hear about a good witch coven too. ***** From me but next time try to avoid the cliche 'thick ropes of cum'.

5*****, great story, you are the best .

DAMN, what an Amazing Author, my Favorite Author! So glad the Meds are causing your imagination to flow so freely. I thoroughly loved this story! Hell, I love all your stories so much that most all I've read more than 3 times each. One of the great things about your writing is that you don't try to jamb such a fantastic story into 3 pages, you let the creative juices flow and so what if it's 25 pages. Thank you so much for being you and sharing your stories with us! GODSPEED! 5 BIG ASS HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Loved it. Is this a one off story or will there me more chapters?

***** Well done as usual. Your talent is varied and comprehensive. Your editor missed a few, I copied out two I will send to you.

Thanks for another exceptional story. Anony Mous

This is surely a magical story that I least expected to enjoy. I thought it would be forced and frankly, juvenile or purely titillating. Boy, was I surprised? It was a mature, well thought out and well-written story. And with some good humor, if I may add. It is a BurntRedstone and Literotica masterpiece that I will forever cherish and re-read often because of its delightful characters and good-natured narrative.

Damn! You have a Prodigious talent! I'm really grateful you've taken your time and effort to share it.

what a fantastic tale... was late to finding it but enjoyed it immensely !! Thank you.

Well done!!!!!

What happened to Elke?

An honest to god ending. Well done.

Really good..

Hectare - Elke was helping make dinner when got home.