All Comments on 'Watching Wife Being Seduced'

That was hot and very sexy, Want to hear more about her coming back to see them.

date rape drug?

Hubby is reporting on his wife's cheating, but has no reaction himself? What did I miss, or is hubby an android?

Seduction and giving in to temptation is always very sexy and envisioning a tight 23 year old woman trying to resist her attraction to an older couple is hot but the betrayal is what is unsettling. Janice is not innocent here - her protest are never about her not wanting it but we never really know what it is that's stirring her growing need. They've uncovered something in her but she is uncertain and clearlly uncomfortable with acting in it. Anne and Matt (on the other hand) only care about getting her aroused to cloud her judgement. It was hot that Janice (and her husband) got off on it, but the predatory way Matt and Anne manipulated Janice was a constant distraction. Maybe there are details unwritten that make this story a little better

Enjoyed the story but... try to catch the simple mistakes by re-reading your story to catch things like...

"Anne was sitting with them telling Anne how sexy and beautiful she was."

...it had too many simple errors. The story could have been excellent if it didn't have so many simple errors. I am one of the editors that offer my editing services to Literotica writers for free. You need to use one of us and your next story could be awesome.

I loved it. Please continue this story.

Wonderful. Please keep up the good work.

I'M EROTIC... NOT

I thought your story was really erotic and a great first submission. Hope there's lots more.

There were many places where the story could have used punctuating emotion. Idk if I'm alone on this, but it felt like I was reading something written by a teenager who had flunked literature at least once. It just makes it difficult to get emotionally involved, which is a powerful sensation. This could be a great story, once it undergoes harsh editing.

I really loved your story........ I Imagined it was my life being pleased.....

Part 2 would be the confrontation. Heads would roll.

I love it..part 2 please

FTDS!!!

I liked it a lot. As I read it I imagined that it was my wife and that Matt was really hung . Later that night the husband begins to feel Janice's pussy and discovered the smell of Matt's sperm...then it gets really interesting.

So many typos made the story distracting and frustrating. Just a little attention to detail could really improve its readability and make for a pleasant read.

Love it I wish it had been me. We have been married over 10 years and our sex life has become 1 to 2 nights a week. I think I would enjoy it but, my husband would love it more. Part 2 please

short and hot, just what i needed

Excellent!

(🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 ) ❤❤!

it was so hot....love for my wife to have the same experience

Two major things wrong with this story... 1st-- wife cheating behind husbands back.. I'm ok with wife sharing just NOT in secrets and cheating... 2nd- the stupid wimp husband.. go in and join them and let them know you're ok with it but you want to watch and be included.. what a stupid wimp that can't even get up enough balls to walk in

I found watch and sharing my wife is really hot wish more people would be open and honest.

The Story was ok for most part but my only hangup was that it seemed to be rushed, would loved to read more details

Sexy

I would really like to watch my wife being seduced, especially by an older well endowed man. This story does need an ending.

So frickin’ hot.

Superbe histoire

Friggin whore. The wife says I’m not sure this is right? She is on your bed making out with this guy, while his wife watches, and she thinks this might not be right? Give me a fuckin break. Just her ignorance alone tells you all you need to know about her suitability for marriage. Divorce that whore! Didn’t find this erotic at all. More like idiotic

I gave this short story 1*only, sorry I rarely score so low. I didn't finish it, not because of the subject matter. I like these type of stories, but sadly it was riddled with errors. Not sure if English is your first language but it was not good.