All Comments on 'We're Not all Suckers'

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other2other1other2other16 months ago

Nice, I enjoyed that.

Lector77Lector776 months ago

Sounds like the reunion I skipped about fifty years ago. And, probably, many of the subsequent editions.

Well written and edited.

Thanks.

LechemanLecheman6 months ago

Hmm yes, reunions.

I never went to them as I was told a few years after leaving school, a large number of my mates had befallen bad luck through death in many forms - would have been a dismal reunions methinks.

Enjoyed the story.

Buster2UBuster2U6 months ago

19 Big Blazing Stars for Great Writing. Been there and done that. Thanks, Buster2U

Just_WordsJust_Words6 months ago

Good story. That woman has a lot of nerve.

Pinto931Pinto9316 months ago

Page 1 Sylvia was a cousin page 2 she was a friend

MattblackUKMattblackUK6 months ago

That story made visiting Literotica worthwhile today. 5* excellence

servant111servant1116 months ago

Absolutely excellent.

5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This was a very enjoyable read. It's great to see a man keeping his eye on what's important - fresh chocolate chip cookies!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Stupid bitch got what she deserved.

doctrptdoctrpt6 months ago

Amazing that so many of us have a Sylvia or two in our past. Not because of us, but because there are that many women out there who choose to behave like that. This story was my five year reunion to a "t". Thank goodness for real friends who had forewarned me.

Great story, well done!

lujon2019lujon20196 months ago

the women who dont NEED money often turn out to be the cheapest gold diggers of them all

EastCoaster1EastCoaster16 months ago

Nicely done, and my only question is how did Sylvia go from Alice's cousin to her friend ?

Other than that very minor detail, this was a fun and well-written story.

Well played, Sir.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Sorry, couldn’t get through it. It was incredibly dull. The MC came across as a sanctimonious prick. To those that thought this a great story I would say that A, you are very easily amused. Or, B, reliving some teenaged trauma.

stillnonamestillnoname6 months ago

Good boy, you learned her a lesson and are a savior of mankind. /s

gabe_playsgabe_plays6 months ago

We should all aspire to be like Doug.

HarddaysknightHarddaysknight6 months ago

I enjoyed this. Nice job.

Sloburn38Sloburn386 months ago

Well done, as always. I think every man can relate to your story. I lost count of how many times I bought expensive meals, but I always regarded it as a test, are you worth the time and effort. Until the last and best experience it was always a no, then heaven visited earth, and I was rewarded.

GamblnluckGamblnluck6 months ago

Nice story. I would have missed this except it showed up on a list of 'recommended' in LW.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

An interesting tale, I enjoyed it (I remember a couple 'Sylvias' in my past). Thank you PS! 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

HawkeyeA1HawkeyeA16 months ago

Interesting, and not too far of the mark.

inka2222inka22226 months ago

Easy 5 stars, great story!

Pappy7Pappy76 months ago

Nice story. He was polite to everyone but also straight forward in his purpose. I liked this character and surprisingly the author allowed the ex football player to be something other than a caricature. Thanks and again, well done.

Ghostno21Ghostno216 months ago

Very very good story thanks for sharing with us. 5 stas all the way.

oldpantythiefoldpantythief6 months ago

Well done. Glad that Doug had the awareness to realize what Sylvia was up to and the backbone to get up and walk out. So many people would have continued to sit there and suffered in silence, not wanting to cause a scene.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Decent story. 4 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Good story, although the ending was short.

grey228grey2285 months ago

There's a Wendy in Peter Pan, but I don't remember an Alice.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Very nicely done

TC Ireland

TheMTOneTheMTOne5 months ago

C'mon, you know you want to write a Romance sequel about Amelia, don't you?

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy5 months ago

Hit the nail on the head! BTW, I do like exclamation points.

5

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Sorry but this was a convoluted nothing burger.

Like food at a pretentious restaurant, all style and no substance.

Old_Fart2Old_Fart24 months ago

Almost like a Greek orator who is dispensing object lessons to the masses…

SteelPaperTSteelPaperT4 months ago

Great. Unfortunately the part about his delivering the truth to a GROUP of women doesn't fly. If there's more than two females present, 1 will always stick up for the womans' story.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman4 months ago

good lesson for both Genders.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I don't recall any "Alice" in Peter Pan.

PostScriptorPostScriptorabout 1 month agoAuthor

OMG!! Mia culpa, mia maxima culpa! Indeed it was Wendy in Peter Pan, and Alice in Alice in Wonderland. I also misused arthroscopy when it should have been laparoscopy in another story, and used 'penultimate' when I meant simply ultimate. It happens when I write too fast.

But I don't confuse 'decimate' (1/10th) when the real word is 'devastate' (so damn common these days), and I never use 'travesty' when the word called for is 'tragedy'. Oh well, we have our little quirks.

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