by LucyCanyon
STOP!
JUST STOP!
Pick a POV.
JUST PICK ONE!
ONLY ONE!
This is not an improvement over the first chapter.
It is just getting worse.
Loved the story
Might finish one pov the go the other for fluid of the story
But it is refreshing to get both sides
Wish I could find somebody like her to go on the same journey with, straight male looking for bi sexual female as I have the same fetishes, love the textures and sensuality of women's clothes and thought of lite bdsm
Can be in the same room conversing with a male but that's it no dancing and diffinently No Sex or even close to another males cock
Might sound prude but a women with a strapon is different in my mind
@Hindsight
If you don't like how it's written please don't read it. I explained why it is like it is - Annie and I bounced this back and forth, if I don't include her experiences and writing then you miss how it felt for her and how she pushed me to new areas.
It's going to be like this regardless to do justice and be fair to the contribution my friend made.
Loved the story and was not all that hard too follow with the back and forth of dialog......I hope there will be more chapters un the futute