All Comments on 'Who's My Dad'

I don't think the plot device of a conversation with the daughter makes sense for the very lengthy and graphic monologue delivered by her mom. There's no way a mother daughter conversation happens like that I do otherwise like the premise of the story.

The story moved well until your ending. You created just enough interest in the half brother and then did nothing with it. I understand the husband's desire to not know the truth, but I doubt the daughter would avoid finding out who her genetic sire was.

Eeeeeeewwwwwwwwwww

Nice for a willing cuckold take, well for those who like it but not at all ‘real’. I can imagine someone having to do this and I can see aged have to ‘confess’ to whoring herself but telling her daughter all about her skitty adventures and all the details - no, your child know g you had to whore yourself to survive is hard enough, without giving her the gory details. Things will be awkward going forward has women cannot keep a secret and soon others will know. Could have just played it die by saying she did it awhile and had an accident instead of almost glorifying her experience. Hard to think she remained faithful to the husband after experiencing multiple me has much.

When the time comes we do what we have to do to survive. A good story.

It's time to cut all ties with the whore and the pimp or at least never leave the grandchildren unsupervised with them.

Sorry, I just can't figure out the significance of the last line. Don't have a clue.

It’s called ‘living off immoral earnings’ and prostitution by any other name. Husband was her pimp with his head firmly buried in the sand. In passing on the choker was the mother hoping her daughter would carry on the family tradition? Who knows…who cares.

A strip joint that supplies outfits for the strippers to wear? That doesn't seem likely to me. I can't imagine any woman would want to wear anything that's been worn by someone else without at least putting it through the wash herself first. In my experience of such places the ladies bring their own outfits with them and take them home again.

Ah, the joys of the US system.

Thanks for the heads up.

A very moral anony said that it was time to cut all ties with the whore and her pimp. Why? She did what she had to do for her family and her to survive.

They were hitting the local food bank, a pretty depressing thing, were doubtless on welfare, and about to lose their house. When the economy Improved and her husband was able to get another job, she quit.

It's an okay story about repercussions of Ancestry DNA tests. But as someone else commented, it's unlikely the mom would go into such extreme detail when explaining the DNA issue to her daughter.

I'll give it a 4.

Not really cheating IMHO. The husband and wife decided together to do all this, husband took responsibility for his side of the equation.

I enjoyed the way you spun your tale. You delivered a journey that most people would be disgusted to even think about taking. I think you created the real world scenario that the average person could realize that it has the potential for them to become a part of in hard times.

That is what makes this one an Outstanding Read ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ in my book.

Thanks for sharing your creation.

Keep Writing

JH4Fun

You do what you need to do

I don''t know why this scored so low -- I liked it. 5*

This is a really good story. No bad guys, just ordinary people taking tough decisions that have consequences. Excellent job. Well done and thank you

What the previous poster said...no bad guys, just people mature enough to live with the consequences of actions.

We debated for some time whether or not to get an abortion, so then we’d know who the father was for sure? In what universe does that make sense?

Is it any surprise Reed Richards is just fine with whoring his wife out if that's what it takes to pay through mortgage?

What if it isn't as dire as that Reed?

What if you just wanna install a pool in your backyard? "Honey...if you could just be a prostitute for 3 or 4 months...we could have a really nice pool..."

Yeah...I really like it when someone is critical of someone else for being "too moral" when they object to the idea their wife is a prostitute. What an asshole.

Well written story about

life. Real life.

Boring, actually. There was no tension or emotion in this tale.

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The husband could have swallowed his pride and tried to bring in some money by working as a simple day laborer, or something like that, rather than have his wife turn prostitute. She could have also tried getting a simple temp job in an office, working as a checker in a grocery store, etc. No need to immediately become a whore. Also, once pregnant and knowing that there was a good likelihood that the fetus was not her husband's, she could have at LEAST considered an abortion. I guess I simply don't think too highly of this husband and wife.

Don't you love it when people blame external issues for their internal failures? The daughter now knows her existence was just collateral damage from her mother's prostitution business. She was not conceived in love, but in the heat of a fucking contest. And the birth mother even saved her a trophy from the time her mother was a professional cum dump. Its obvious an abortion was a bit of a toss up decision; uh . . . , ok, let's let IT live. The parents didn't even know if the child was conceived with genetic problems. It was just sex, and A Lot of money. I guess that was the overriding value in this family: you do whatever you have to do to get enough money to do what you want to do. Virtue, ethics, morals, self respect, they just get in the way.

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Here's what's funny, especially in a white collar business management economy where staff and managers are like trained circus animals. They are just used to get the business completed, and they are disposable and interchangeable. They are a dime a dozen. But guess who's not a dime a dozen: the people who fix things and make things work. The technicians.

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This story is about people who have no self respect are too stupid and too lazy to develop marketable skills. Guess who is never unemployed: electricians, plumbers, hvac mechanics, equipment operators and repair people in all aspects of the business world. And before you say you can't do that, how many plumbers and electricians have you met that reminded you of Albert Einstein?

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This story is a joke, and a fraud. There is No Reason why the whore couldn't keep fucking people on the side for extra money, and why wouldn't she? And her sex life with her husband? Yeah, just freebees. Like the left overs the restaurant owner takes home to the family when she closes at night. Yum, yum, come and get. Just pathetic.

A thought provoking story. There but for the grace of God go I?

A four from me.

On the one hand, it seems like Terry is still owed some financial compensation for raising another man's daughter though? Child support would have helped while Terry was still out of a job. It was still a year after she gave birth that he was unemployed. MC now has a last name and she remembers most of the first names. It wouldn't take much to find the wealthy businessman who knocked her up.

On the other hand, while Terry knew how his wife was making money, I would consider her weekend barebacked party cheating. Simply because it was unnecessary. In her first week she made $3550. As she learned to work the angles and became more popular with the regulars her weekly average would likely increase. Still, basing her income on a possible low average of $3550/wk and 52 weeks a year, she had to be pulling in $184,600 annually. She probably would've even even broke $200K annually. She choose to do the bare party and risk a pregnancy and STI. Who couldn't live very well on nearly $200K back in the early 1990s? Crap, our family lived decently on a lot less! Her decisions don't add up to true fidelity. — TANSTAAFL

Whether I like the premise or not doesn't really matter. The story is well told, well constructed, makes you want to finish it, and it is well edited. I liked what you did here. Good writing. 5 stars.

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Ok, but lacked tension.

She broke her promise of "Bareback" and slutting. The reason, does not matter. If they couldn't make it on $150,000.00 per year, there is no excuse. Not to mention I bet they didn't claim any of that on their taxes. Then to go back to it after having the kid, ENTITLED SLUT WHORE, and Money Grubbing Husband.

I made it work on $24,000.00 a year, and raised my kids with no support from the ex, all on my own as a single dad, in a state that punishes a man. Out of that, I still had to pay her child support.

No, No excuse for her breaking her promises.

Did he get to go out and play, scratching his itch? I bet not.

Cunts rule the world, and never are accountable.

Yeah, well....An interesting idea.

A boring story, nothing happened.

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I'm going to read some of the sixteen stories you have posted. Maybe there is drama, somewhere 🤔.

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AMerryman

10 Big Blazing Stars for a Hot story. I think it would be Hot to let your wife have a child fathered by someone else as she works as a hooker. LOL I liked this story. It was interesting. Thanks, Buster2U

Nope I would never be married to whore. There are always alternatives, most couples suck it up and get through the bad times, My wife and I once had no jobs, no money, but my family and particularly my parents helped us out we lived with them for six months saved up money, both jobs and lived happily ever after. If my wife had suggested selling her body to survive the answer would be she would do it as a single parent. You fuck strippers and whores you don't marry them.

This happened to my MIL LOL

agree that all that detail would not have been disclosed to the kid and I have no idea at all why she would keep that choker. Sell it years ago!

I agree that telling her story by having her tell her daughter all the sketchy details is gross. Better would have had her reminiscing to herself before telling the daughter the bare bones story.

Very creative story line, I really liked how you kept the sex narrative low key as fundamental to the main theme of what the mother had to do to get by and how the daughter came about.

The husband doesn't want to know but wouldn't the wife be curious as to who the father is? The kid must have all the info now to share.

Stupid as stupids are

No contraceptive pill

No condoms

No sexually transmitted diseases

No neurons

No balls

A quick summary

Less than 1

Only women that are lowlife scum would do shit like this there are a hundred other things you could do but you to become a prostitute instead but lose the respect of your husband and family what a joke.

Tough times call for tough decisions. A good story all the same. 5 stars

"If you don't like stories where the cheater gets away with it or gets forgiven for it, this story and many others in my catalog are not for you." - Lost a star for the lame-ass warning. No, I don't like those kinds of stories, that doesn't mean that my mind is closed, and you can't win me over with a well-written, realistic story. Unfortunately this isn't one,

I shared my wife with my best friend and he knocked her up. They got together regularly without my knowledge as I was on steady afternoons for 6 months.

She was just a cheap whore, the old whoring for the family trope, doesn’t know who the daddy is. No one can be this desperate.

In two words, a 'Whore' wife and a 'Cuck' husband.

I agree withhondsight2020

It read like a script i believe there would of been a lot of emotions involved not just about the pregnancy.the fact that her mother was a whore and her father as she knew what she was doing don't you think she would need counselling

A few problems with this story.

One of them: why does the mother go into these kind of details when telling this to her daughter, like she's telling her daughter a spank story? I mean, I know that's the *writer's* objective, but thinking about this stuff is how you become a better writer.

Another one: the story has no tension. Everyone's just fine with everything. The daughter doesn't mind that she's probably the result of her mother (needlessly) prostituting herself to a bunch of guys, and then added insult to injury by using her pregnancy to make more money turning tricks. Imagine your mom telling you she was selling her body for money when she was pregnant with you.

And yeah, *needlessly* because as the previous anon pointed out, she was making so much money she didn't need to do this bareback weekend.

The conversation with the daughter went far beyond what is plausible. The plot however is interesting and clever more tension concerning the wife's activities would have improved the story. Still five stars

Yeah absolutely unrealistic.

You just love weak cuckolded men.

Complete ridiculous bullshit

Missing the cuckold tag.

Some people are treating this as reality, something in an advice column. It's a story, and I think a pretty good one.

My only reservation is that despite all the attention to the risk of pregnancy, the risk of STIs is off the table, as the author declares at the beginning. Seems just a little inconsistent.

She told all that story to her daughter? What was the need? ***

Why would you tell your daughter all the awful details of how you were a whore and allowed God knows how many men to go bareback in all of your holes?

All you have to say is that you were desperate for money and did some things that you are ashamed of but having the kid isn't one of them.

And if you're Lynn would you want the jewellery knowing how your mother earned them?

Interesting plot. Now you should give Lynn the choker before you will it to her. Maybe, her hearing your story, the spark has ignited the flame & got her juices flowing to the point it makes her want to step out & plying her Mommy's trade. Who knows she may convince you to to step out with her & start a business together. Let's face it, for that kind of money an accidental anonymous oops new baby might not be so bad. Heck, y'all may even run into the Wagstaff guys & have some mutually related DNA swapping. Could even become regulars for them & Lynn finds out she likes her real Daddy's & half Brother's seed deposits. That should make it even more interesting. 5☆

Two stars. Not feeling the angle on this one.

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Mom's does have to respond to the query but there is certainly no need to layout the detailed history to her daughter. Life can be complicated. Yet, childern -- even adult ones -- don't need or have a right to know everything their parents got into. So the angle to get Mom's story presented struck me as off kilter.

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Mom's tale is milding interesting. Truth is every sex worker has one.

Two stories on the same theme today.

- find situations in which the woman has extramarital relations and try to find excuses or circumstances: prostitution to avoid bankruptcy, mental illness or she is no longer responsible for her actions.

But these stories are distressingly simple and Disney-like.

Nothing is ever said about the psychological consequences for the individuals involved, or the repercussions on those around them, especially their children.

Having experienced several real-life cases of prostitution for a living, or prostitution for the landlord to pay the rent..... never ends well, especially for the children who know what's going on.

Not much drama in your other LW stories.

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Interesting erotic fiction. Kinda too short a story considering her prostitution career lasted two years, including through her pregnancy. A lot of room for a sequel, esp. why the mother felt she had to share the story in explicit detail. But it's odd...working in a bordello is less stressful than stripping? Two years of servicing clients including weekend gangbangs is better? Dunno. I would've included a few more terms and conditions in the wife's immunity agreement.

The underlying premise is a bit too far for me to get my head around, but I liked the basic storyline. 4.1*

While this surely was not an ideal remedy to their situation, people do what they have to do. There is no need for this mother to hang her head in shame.

Don’t love it; don’t hate it either. I get it. You do what you gotta do under difficult circumstances, And then, everyone acts like adults.

@franceman, you’re working too hard and going out of your way to be offended. I don’t think anyone is arguing that this is the ideal state, but rather that, sometimes, people do what they think they need to do, no matter that it’s a suboptimal choice. Nobody dies here, not were any animals injured or killed in this story. Chill.

Decades of knowing that his wife became a sex worker because he couldn't support his family, and Terry keeps it all bottled up inside, trying to live in denial. Wifey needs to get him to a really good counselor or one fine day, Terry is going to blow sky-high.

Just a story to make hubby a sad and happy cuck while justifying wife being a full blown whore. Really worn out and overused plot.

Good story. At least here, it really is true she's having sex with others for her family. The couple made a hard decision together to try to take care of their family. They didn't hold it against or lose respect for each other. And they didn't blame the child that resulted either. Sad that they were in that position. But this story is about a strong wonderful family.

Only one minor thing, would mom really give so much detail about what happened at the party? That could have been set up as a flashback instead of part of a detailed recounting to the daughter.