All Comments on 'Zia is Recruited by Mars Ch. 02'

Okay, sorry, but it took a turn to the absurd. The strange rules in chapter 1 were actually interesting and created a unique, almost semi-believable setting, where the doctor pushed the boundaries with his behaviour, but this is just daft. Its too much, the doctor would be fired, or more likely seriously assaulted, and virtually everyone in the story behaves like an asshole or a hapless, and very stupid, victim. I realise its fantasy, and erotica, but the characters went from being pretty interesting, to cardboard cut-out villians and clowns. I mean the protagonist has been told the doc is messing with her meds, and she's going to take the shot anyway? Is she completely insane? Take the needle and hand it to the corporate police or whatever. Sorry to be so harsh, but its a madhouse. The writing itself is fine.