All Comments on 'Innocent Devil’s Harem Taboo Ch. 66'

Awesome fight! The beginning completely lost me though, I don't understand what happened with the vision at all.

Brilliant. As Robbb says an awesome fight. Will they be able to work out who or what he was?

Too short. Good Cliff hanger. Now to kill off the rest of the army, now that it no longer has a master.

Excellent

Keep up the great work my friend this story is awesome

Yes keep up the great work love this story can’t wait to read what comes next

wow

As seems to be the trend since the beginning, more questions than answers. Is that blade some kind of super-powerful artifact that makes it easy to get through barriers? Who was the "apex" dude exactly and why bother attacking? Who were these 2 new people exactly? Absolutum dissolutum kills-anything spell just coming out of nowhere and it can potentially kill even Kai? (Speculation of course, can't trust anything Miriam says these days, she's wrong a hell of a lot when it comes to these things). Overall I'm left feeling like Kai was portrayed as rather weak and small in this chapter except at the end where he started to regain some of the "demigod status" that we've come to see since his rebirth. Anyway as always I'm hooked and I'm enjoying the series. :)

Love the story. do wish you would work on tightening your language to improve the flow. here are some more examples

Her best friend did need to sincerely train her charm

sincerely not being what I was expecting.

I could sincerely sense the blue-haired magazine model like I

Her sincere desire to comfort me overpowered everything else. <- this one actually seems right

and I sincerely hoped they'd continue to cross those lines, <- also good

Sincere terror in her expression... Palpable terror in her expression ?

sincere fear finally crossing his previously hardened expression.

@bhojo

A valid synonym for sincerely is the word 'truly' (as well as 'seriously' and even just 'really').

"I could sincerely sense..."

"I could 'truly' sense..."

"I could 'really' sense..."

Also:

"Sincere terror in her expression..."

"Genuine terror in her expression..."

"True terror in her expression..."

"Real terror in her expression..."

The word sincerely is being used correctly in all instances.