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Deejay121Deejay121over 9 years ago
Omg what emotion

I don't know we're to start the BDSM in the earlier chapters has been quite amazing sometimes a little unbelievable, but hey the emotion in these last two chapters has bought tears to my eyes, and that's a guy approaching retirement. How much better does this final book become, will I be able to read the instalments through blubbing eyes. Absolutely amazing 5 stars for each and every chapter, I could just keep going on, but must leave that up to You

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
5 star story telling.

Just a line to say I agree with deejay.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Again.

Yep, you did it again.

Well done.

Very thankful that you stuck with the true direction of your story, even though (more than?) a few folks are upset about Livy. I'll keep reading, sex or no sex, as long as you keep posting.

Thanks, CJT.

- michel

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing as always

Sex or no Sex I will read every chapter of this you publish because it is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I been sad, happy, horney, surprised, delighted, left wondering, a little mad at you (livly's death) but totally enthralled by this story and how you've made it so great to read.....thanks

Missy10256Missy10256over 9 years ago

I LOVE this story so so so much. I think I will probably miss having more their "private encounters".. I think it's such a lovely expression of their relationship (and quite erotic/sexy too!) But I love how deep and rich these characters are and how you let them express themselves through their actions and dialogue. Truly Wonderful! Thank you!

Shimmy19Shimmy19over 9 years ago
I love this direction! Please hurry!

Omg love it !

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I will buy your book

I have read every chapter and have loved how you have a actually plot but still has a d/s relationship. And you show this kind of relationship so well because any real relationship will have its ups and downs and won't always be about sex (even though the sex might be amazing). Whenever you publish it, I am buying all of them!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love It

Stop apologizing for not having sex! Not every chapter of an erotica book has to be filled with sex! You're a fabulous writer. I will say I am a little concerned about whether Alex and Gavin are ready for a child, but I am

Sure you will work it all out.

kitten_in_heatkitten_in_heatover 9 years ago
I'm a mess

Crying over every chapter you've thrown our way. First, it was over Livy's death and now I'm crying over their strength together as a family trying to rebuild their lives.

This story is just...truly heart-felt in the best and worst ways possible. Moving.

Like someone else said, you don't need to apologize about the lack of sex. The rest of the content more than makes up for it.

Crazy_ChristineCrazy_Christineover 9 years ago
Thank you. I know that I've said that before; but today I really needed your writing

I let myself be the victim of an online scam==lost a lot of $. Sitting; staring at the sunlight --your work has helped me put my private loss into perspective. God Bless You.

slipperyslutslipperyslutover 9 years ago

When I started reading this story, I never expected it to take me on such an emotional rollercoaster. I have absolutely fallen in love with this story and Alex and Gavin. I hope if/when you decide to publish this story, you will let us know so that I can purchase the books. You are an amazing writer. I cannot wait for the next part of the story.

Cindy1001Cindy1001about 9 years ago
No hate, love

You mention that you received hatemail. I do hope you do not count me in. I wrote that I was sad at the end of the previous chapter and I was. This Chapter, I have gone into mourning. But although I may have been sad, I will always be grateful for your beautiful writing. I love it.

Apple_of_EdenApple_of_Edenabout 9 years ago
Heartfelt

Part 37 and I love all of it. The last two parts have been my favorites of the entire story so far. The feelings and emotions you've portrayed are so real, as the reader, you can't help but share them with your characters-and to me-that's what makes a good story...a GREAT story. Thanks for writing a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Wow! I come here for some mildly titillating erotica.

Then you draw me into this story and characters to the point were I pay no attention to the sex.

Well maybe a little.

Thank you for not making Livy and Father Jack a tawdry affair and not taring all religion with the same hateful strokes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Priceless!

Absolutely priceless!! The perfect act of passive aggressive rebellion!

When zealots start destroying art, books and objects of beauty you have to fight back in whatever way you can. Prime example is Savonarola 1497 and The Bonfire of The Vanities (well first of many) all in the name of religion, such a waste.

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